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darkoneko: mechas requiring les logistics than tanks for maintenance ? I don't buy it.The Mech Touch · C1
RadikX: The f*** 2 chapters are titled Antiques..... and only in the last 7 text lines the air of tells something..... and that something is nothing.... WTF author.A Wizard's Secret · C6
Yuanwei: Tsk tsk... It should've been the other book that was released. At least it was an orignal and a very interesting concept. Now this here, this is just something you can find somewhere else. It doesnt matter if it delays a week because the author will still upload it, but an original is much more entertaining. Now I have wasted a week of my life. Which is always by the way.
Well, this book is somewhat okay, with its natural dose of cliches. Concept is common and story is somewhat confusing. Well I hope you do your best. How much words do I have to type until this bloody review can be posted? Oh d*mn. I haven't done the ratings yet. That's why I cant post. There... done! Well pleasure to meet you. Aufwiedersehen!Virtual World: Close Combat Mage
Number One Dungeon Supplier · C1
Nat7AI: Read this on Wuxiaworld not opinion fact!
I don't normally do reviews but I just had to review this because while there aren't any issues with the novel itself or the translation quality. There is a major issue in that text has been removed from this one, text surrounded by brackets [example]. So starting with chapter five information that relates to skills and objects start appearing in those brackets, which can be easily checked. So you don't get the full experience of the novel on Qidian, to get the full translation in terms of quality read on Wuxiaworld. At least until they include missing text.
TL;DR Text has been removed here, it's complete on WuxiaworldGate of Revelation
Ravagesworlds: I believe his end goal is to fundamentally change the “system” of the new world as a whole he can’t do that if he joins a religion that is pretending to be good but is preying on the weakDark King · C29
Rebirth of the Entertainment Giant · C1
Idle_Daoist_: This book is I don't know what to say other than average cliche and done a million times with a different occupation- but the problem is the author seemingly can't say names and so every character Non-han is 'Ethnic Minority #1-#2, etc' And to top it off its filled with racist remarks and annoying mid paragraph character thoughts that seemingly want to get to the end of the chapter so you then read the next chapter. I'm pretty sure this will go Premium at an insanely high price but it's not worth it. It's trying to be IRAS but doesn't come close and this book causes mere shame upon the Zhang Family.Path of Medicine With a System
Kyle_Hope: AND IS NO ONE GOING TO TALK ABOUT HOW HE HAS TOUCH OF DEATH...NO ONE??!?!?!Abuse of Magic · C136
Tibbles: The conflict flag is real and ever present...... something bad is going to happen soon mark my words...Abuse of Magic · C97
Mukigen: I have an odd feeling something bad is going to due to them throwing all these "it's going to be fine" flags around x_xAbuse of Magic · C97
AzureMatt: To be completely honest, this book needs a lot of work!! The characters are super hollow and lack any personality at all, there are spelling mistakes in almost every chapter. It’s like the author did not proof read or get someone else to check over it before being posted! Timeline is also twisted.
This book could be good if further refined.
Things to improve;
1. Proof read!!!! Get a friend to read it!! Run it through a spelling check program if you have too! It’s painful seeing so many errors!
2. Make the characters more realistic! No person is just going to trust the MC’s words out of the blue!! Especially ninja! The fact that all these characters just go along with the MC is disturbing! Where is their free will, or common sense in general?
3. Give the characters a soul, the characters all feel like they are from a cookie cutter. Every character sounds the same and reacts the same, I feel like I am reading about 1 person pretending to be every single other character!
4. Less time skips, we know nothing about the MC! He just gets stronger suddenly after a few months! If this was a cultivation novel you could pull it off, but not with naruto. We need time to learn about the MC’s personality and see character development.
5. Plan! At this rate the MC will be the strongest ninja ever in 20-30 chapters!! What will happen after that? A book needs conflict and cliffhangers, but when the MC is op what will he need to bother with? He is already stronger that most S rank ninja!
6. The MC is a soulless robot, the only emotion we have seen is his desire for revenge!! Other than that the MC shows nothing! Even his affection to naruto is cold and empty!
These are the big things that need to be improved!
Remember apart from the MC, the characters all have a personality from the Naruto universe, you just need to copy those really!Shinobi system in elemental nation
Hipknow: SpOiLeR /(-_-)\
[I just caught cancer from this book]
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TheDemonNazI: WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT... HOLD THE FUCK UP........ HES NORMAL?????? THATS NORMAL???? BEING A SEMIPRO HIKER/BLACKBELT AAAAAND OWNING A SMALL COMPANY THAT CAN GET HIM DECENT FUNDS........... NORMAL MY ASS
sounds like many girls dream man lolAn Average Guy In A Shinobi World · C1
Akki3: Waste of time. Don't even try to read it................
..................................................................................Transmigrated into Naruto World(dropped)
Transmigrated into Naruto World(dropped)
blueman321: No you idiot. He's copying another persons fanfiction. Thats why they are saying that.Absolute Stealing
A Bend in Time
Slowbat: In the first few minutes the line "but you didn't saw it" was uttered, such a grave offence shall not be forgiven.
Would not suggest reading, unless you are an uncultured pig the horrendous errors that lay within shall physically hurt you.Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen
Tartarus: Yup,it feels like the mc is only extra character that are forced into the story to make it a little difference. Just POV from an extra characterHarry Potter and the Fortunate Queen
Skepparn: I don't know how to properly say it but the characters feels bland and a little forced for some reason, like mc feels out of place and doesn't fit, it's like she's not an mc and she's not supposed to be there, hard to explain but the way it's written with how mediocre the mc is and on top of that mc doesn't do much it just feels weird and for me it made it barely readable, got to ch15 and couldn't continue any longer without getting bored out of my mindHarry Potter and the Fortunate Queen
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