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The Immortal Empire:
It was time to ascend the heavens and break free from heavens fate, to guard against and destroy the invading forces of the demons and gods, he looked upon the Heavens one last time before he turned to face his men.
With his mind determined he said to his companions "Let us be rid of these parasites once and for all!"
His younger brother took a step forward with passion in his eyes he yelled "For the Emperor!" the other Immortals bowed in agreement, they replied, " FOR THE EMPEROR!".
As the Heavens churned above to strike down the one who would try and make the laws of Heaven and Earth kneel before him. The Heavens seemed to roar as they unleashed their wrath upon the world.
In a realm far detached from the will of the heavens a beautiful elf with golden eyes, pale white hair and alabaster skin so fair one would believe him an angelic being.
As he stood above the anvil staring at his creation, not with pride but disgust.
"Another failure, come here and take this with the others and have them destroyed, send word and these gifts to Lord Kele'brimbor, I need his help".
A young servant girl stepped forward taking the ring and placing in a silver box lined in runes with dozens of other failures.
She placed the other gifts that were placed next to the anvil into her satchel noticing the extra weight from the black box that seemed as if there were tiny stars from the nights' sky placed upon it the servant girl bowed "Right away Lord Sauron."
As she turned closing the silver box leaving the tower, there was a faint flash of green coming from a small crack in one of the runes and beneath the sound of a breeze, a light sigh could be heard.
Disclaimer: contains Adult themes, sexual content, violence
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Very good novel thus far. Though there will always be good stories with minor grammar and punctuation errors, the overall story development is outstanding and I am on the edge of my seat while reading. Highly recommend to everyone :) -dff123
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Why read and comment a ton without a single review? We can do both within our short attention span! If you don't like betrayals or systems, then you might want to give them a second chance by reading this novel! Don't we all like our undead liches? Or even some ladies? Well, why not come read for them and stay for the plot? Grammar could use some work, but it's overall easy to understand. However, I would advise spacing out the sentences, paragraphs, or synopsis more since it is difficult to read huge blocks of text, especially on mobile which I know a lot of people read on. However, its a good start and keep it up Chthulu, I mean, Author! >3</
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Love the start out. Author uses his skills to bring you in. Starting with a more complex past to get u up to current times where u meet main character this story is interesting; addictive; funny ; complex suspenseful should be read and shared. Love Darkz
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Alright folks this is the shameless author 5-star post so be prepared for shamelessness, I'm planning some devious things for this novel may be a little romance if I can figure that out, ladies if I do it wrong just let me know how and I'll try and fix my ways, I swear, gentleman if I do it wrong and you have some ideas about it and ways to help me improve my shameless ways all I can say is post it and good luck. I look forward to this journey with all readers, oh and it's a Fan fic novel but I won't get to heavy into it have fun and good luck!