S.elf: Digital Battles

Rick is a kid that wants to be the best S.elf player in the world.
What's S.elf you might be asking?
S.elf stands for Super Elf and it's the most popular video game on earth, every person has a digital avatar (called S.elf) which are used for multiple daily day tasks, but this story mostly focus on the game aspect.
I'm new, but any constructive criticism is welcomed.
I plan to release at least a chapter per week, thanks for reading :D comments really encourage me btw

If you want to chat, here's a Discord I made for the story: https://discord.gg/eh7awNUD
I also have a patreon that I have had for some time, in case you want to donate: www.patreon.com/rija