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Scáthach in Multiverse (Male MC, DxD main world)
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The story of "hero" and his adventures on different missions in the multiverse
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The character will be like Esdeath, OP, but there may be obstacles in the future. There will be no nerf, but sometimes he will just be an observer of events, nothing more.
DxD will be AU, and story mostly will be about quests.
Tags: antihero, harem(no pokemon), gore, blood and so on
It's my first time writing, so do not expect it to be good. I have to start from something.
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I have never written a review before, so it's my first time. First of all, Writing Quality: It's not perfect, but readable. There are too many commas here and there, so try working on that. Stability of Updates: Currently good, but it only has 6 chapters, so I can't be sure. Story Development: Too many time skips without any detail about what happened in between. Time skips aren't bad, but you should try to write more details. Character Design: The MC seems very blank, but I think the author will tell more about him later. Him being Scathach is very interesting, though. World Background: No idea what to put here.
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not really up to my expectations needs a rewrite honestly a bunch of random fast paced I liked that the author has fresh ideas with using stuff not commonly used like nanomancer and anos I dont really get good romance vibes and comedic scenes are a bit awkward to me honestly author should plot what worlds he wants mc to go too and show us his fights and make sure the powerscaling is alright like why make him a glass Canon when the fic gives wish fulfilment vibe nothing against it honestly
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I actually found the story entertaining especially since I've never seen or read a story where the MC is a genderbend Scathach, i really loved the skills though i didn't like when he changed looks but atleast it wasn't permanent, (I loved his normal looks which was basically scathach but as a male)
It's readable however its all over the place and kinda painful to read. Some parts are really cringy. Some developments are also really fast, and I recommend expanding on them more instead of just quickly going through it, also the time skips are a bit much. Like at the beginning there was already a timeskip. You should have expanded more on the character a bit before the timeskip, or if you wanted you could have done it like a preview of the future to hype up the readers and have them wondering how the story reached that point. Despite its flaws its an enjoyable story and I hope you improve upon it.
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honestly its just a bunch of stuff mixed together no plot terrible romance(or whatever that was) not to be rude but seriously jalter is the most cliche tsundere i have ever read about maybe it works for other people but im out (no offence)