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I LOVE IT!! SEPTEM IS A HIDDEN GEM π \(>w<)/ β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
Continue author, I love this novel since I read it earlier, although there is one thing that bothers me and it is that the progress of events is slow.
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Great story, with great way of storytelling. Only minus is some gramar but that can be only get better by writing. Remember this is rewrite so there isn't that thrill of unknown yet but it will get better. So author i hope that you wont leave us hanging agin. Last time we didnt even get to see his other personalities.
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Unfortunetly it is probably dropped. If autor comes back, then it will be most welcomed. Story is nice. MC is one of a kind (havent seen mc like him yet)
The story seems quite interesting and unique which I do like, but the grammar is one of the worst. Words like 'word' is 'worth' etc. It's unbearable to read, unfortunately.
I'm enjoying the story so far I just have one request that is stable update 7+1::8 souls in one body with 11 element wow nice I'm waiting for new chapters thanks man for this novla
The writing quality is just horrible,there is some sentences I have to read a few times to get what it mean. But the novel is very great,seriously, it's original. Continue like this, but you really need an editor or something.
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Well honestly this book has a very interesting storyline. It just has too much grammatical errors. But overall it's a good book. π€£ππππππππππππππππππππ. ............................................................................................................... .
The English isnt the best but still is readable also the characters are good and the story is nice so far a very good novel But then again expect some grammar errors and thats about it its still a good novel nontheless
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Grammar is absolutely unreadable. Story seems alright but sorta cliche. I like the personalities though Ndndndndndndndndncnvrksockfmenznfnekxk8dydhebvjdkxkkcdjbeebdbdbfbrneffkivivsiernnfvjdkeiejfbfbjckxdjenfncjkfdkjrnrnf
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I don't know what to say,yet again.The concept of 7 sin always was intresting for me,multiply personalites as well.So yeah,it was deffinitly one of those that keep picking my interest.The problem is that,it's not used.Not in a proper way,not in a ortodox psyhological way or even not in a comedy,why?Cuz it's all for later.Like really,all the good stuff can be here,but not now.Yeah,in the world of jungle law and yare-yare-yare,killing and torturing even brainwashing is not a big deal.So why you try to emphasis that he is evil,I don't get it.Yes from our prespectiv it's definitely not a good deed,even if it's happening even in our world,but there he is really mild.More like overprotective father.Or shame and worldbuilding still not there,cuz we can't see or understand where his little games lead.Mostly because we don't know about this world.How he's sin works even in our world ,like where this program of supersoldier just with the own body came from?How greed have more ability in the brain departament if they have one body,wrath punch that can levelled island,how,where it's for a future.So yeah,all for the future.For now whe have questions,it's good but world don't expand.All of this arc,mostly for the sake of future stuff,but I don't see where world and characters got more attention.Now whe have cringe worth slice of life of 8 years kid,who can't do anything but think of future,and flirt with kid.Heck,he don't even enjoy his life,he just work hard,for fighing in the future.It's may sound strange,but I don't have a filling that mc even has life at all.And will change review when story,characters,world or something intresting happend.And no,magic factory is not a progres.Hope for the best,though.
So very interesting and I highly recommend reading this novel to everyone who wants something to read. This story is pretty good from what I see of the other reviews Iβve read and the summary alone. I reading this for sure!! keep chapters coming πππ
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The story seems good in concept but the writing ,grammar is just not readable for me ,I'd suggest either get an editor who can make it better or don't write in English
The story is kinda mysterious but has it own flavour it is quite hard to get the content in some of the chapters but it is really interesting to read .Hope that more chapters be released.
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I like this novel very much although it is not much different form other novels but it has it's special unique story i wonder is there any other novel on multiple personality
I got to say even though they're some spelling mistakes , this is a great read! Please Update Faster!! Quick Summary: The MC is the embodiment of the seven deadly sins, with his own personality intact. He get's summoned to a new world with all his op knowledge and, It's a GG from there.
Good, story delivery quite smooth. Good starter for huge and wide plot while it kept light for reading. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I love this novel. It is amazing to see the concept of "seven other personalities" in one! I can't wait to see what the future holds for them. I also hope, that as they grow together, they bond and learn to help one and other. Rather than having each personality working for their own good. Keep up the great work! I am looking forward to see how this novel goes!
Honest review. Writing? English? Err.. it could be better. there are some errors here and there. Grammar aside, it feels incohesive and jumpy. But the concept is jus that brilliant that it made me overlook all that. Would wish to see more of this in the future βοΈ
noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice noice so sepin... anyone like sepin, the book i mean?
I LOVE IT!! SEPTEM IS A HIDDEN GEM π \(>w<)/ β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
Continue author, I love this novel since I read it earlier, although there is one thing that bothers me and it is that the progress of events is slow.
Like likelikelikelike. Mage force mageforceeeeee gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooood word word word word
Great story, with great way of storytelling. Only minus is some gramar but that can be only get better by writing. Remember this is rewrite so there isn't that thrill of unknown yet but it will get better. So author i hope that you wont leave us hanging agin. Last time we didnt even get to see his other personalities.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Unfortunetly it is probably dropped. If autor comes back, then it will be most welcomed. Story is nice. MC is one of a kind (havent seen mc like him yet)
The story seems quite interesting and unique which I do like, but the grammar is one of the worst. Words like 'word' is 'worth' etc. It's unbearable to read, unfortunately.
I'm enjoying the story so far I just have one request that is stable update 7+1::8 souls in one body with 11 element wow nice I'm waiting for new chapters thanks man for this novla
The writing quality is just horrible,there is some sentences I have to read a few times to get what it mean. But the novel is very great,seriously, it's original. Continue like this, but you really need an editor or something.
20.m2 21.m.teach 31-FD 38.m2 41-SB.AB 51.DelaSis 93-NM 100-DelaSis.Sup 103-m.teach 111-2m 115-MotDaugh 133-3Sis 150-Froze 178-BlackWid 182-FD.NT 194-m 198-motdaugh 221-frozzz 242-FD.LP
Well honestly this book has a very interesting storyline. It just has too much grammatical errors. But overall it's a good book. π€£ππππππππππππππππππππ. ............................................................................................................... .
The English isnt the best but still is readable also the characters are good and the story is nice so far a very good novel But then again expect some grammar errors and thats about it its still a good novel nontheless
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Grammar is absolutely unreadable. Story seems alright but sorta cliche. I like the personalities though Ndndndndndndndndncnvrksockfmenznfnekxk8dydhebvjdkxkkcdjbeebdbdbfbrneffkivivsiernnfvjdkeiejfbfbjckxdjenfncjkfdkjrnrnf
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I don't know what to say,yet again.The concept of 7 sin always was intresting for me,multiply personalites as well.So yeah,it was deffinitly one of those that keep picking my interest.The problem is that,it's not used.Not in a proper way,not in a ortodox psyhological way or even not in a comedy,why?Cuz it's all for later.Like really,all the good stuff can be here,but not now.Yeah,in the world of jungle law and yare-yare-yare,killing and torturing even brainwashing is not a big deal.So why you try to emphasis that he is evil,I don't get it.Yes from our prespectiv it's definitely not a good deed,even if it's happening even in our world,but there he is really mild.More like overprotective father.Or shame and worldbuilding still not there,cuz we can't see or understand where his little games lead.Mostly because we don't know about this world.How he's sin works even in our world ,like where this program of supersoldier just with the own body came from?How greed have more ability in the brain departament if they have one body,wrath punch that can levelled island,how,where it's for a future.So yeah,all for the future.For now whe have questions,it's good but world don't expand.All of this arc,mostly for the sake of future stuff,but I don't see where world and characters got more attention.Now whe have cringe worth slice of life of 8 years kid,who can't do anything but think of future,and flirt with kid.Heck,he don't even enjoy his life,he just work hard,for fighing in the future.It's may sound strange,but I don't have a filling that mc even has life at all.And will change review when story,characters,world or something intresting happend.And no,magic factory is not a progres.Hope for the best,though.
So very interesting and I highly recommend reading this novel to everyone who wants something to read. This story is pretty good from what I see of the other reviews Iβve read and the summary alone. I reading this for sure!! keep chapters coming πππ
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Good novel ...................... more update.................π€΄πππππ¦ππ§ββοΈππ―ππππ―ππ§ββοΈπ€£π§ββοΈπππ€£βΊοΈππ¦π¦π§π§ββοΈπ€£πββοΈπππ΄π§ββοΈπ§π§ββοΈππ§ββοΈπππΈβΊοΈπ―ββοΈππ§ββοΈππββοΈπππππβΊοΈππ―π€΄π―ββοΈππππ¦
The story seems good in concept but the writing ,grammar is just not readable for me ,I'd suggest either get an editor who can make it better or don't write in English
The story is kinda mysterious but has it own flavour it is quite hard to get the content in some of the chapters but it is really interesting to read .Hope that more chapters be released.
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I like this novel very much although it is not much different form other novels but it has it's special unique story i wonder is there any other novel on multiple personality
I got to say even though they're some spelling mistakes , this is a great read! Please Update Faster!! Quick Summary: The MC is the embodiment of the seven deadly sins, with his own personality intact. He get's summoned to a new world with all his op knowledge and, It's a GG from there.
Good, story delivery quite smooth. Good starter for huge and wide plot while it kept light for reading. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I love this novel. It is amazing to see the concept of "seven other personalities" in one! I can't wait to see what the future holds for them. I also hope, that as they grow together, they bond and learn to help one and other. Rather than having each personality working for their own good. Keep up the great work! I am looking forward to see how this novel goes!
Honest review. Writing? English? Err.. it could be better. there are some errors here and there. Grammar aside, it feels incohesive and jumpy. But the concept is jus that brilliant that it made me overlook all that. Would wish to see more of this in the future βοΈ