Shamelessly reincarnating in DXD (DROPPED)

LV 12

Sevennamed

Issei loving Beta MC. If it were any worse he would genderbend himself for Issei. 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

LV 14

Hemy

I'm not being a hater or anything like that but stating my opinion that this novel is shit. Really shitty. I mean I get that this is a fanfic and free but it is really shitty. You say that your "young" maybe that's what limited your imagination. That's all. Another shitty fanfic in this portal.

LV 4

Persin

Wow, I never thought I'd be doing the famous author self review, so here goes. I'm an ******* writer, so you can't expect everything to be perfect. I'm going to try and listen to the opinions of all who read my fanfic, to make it as reader friendly as possible. However, you do have to realize that this is still my fanfic, so if I don't necessarily like what you ask me to do or don't think it would fit in the story, I'm not going to do it, so people who think that this is their fanfic and that they can control me to do what they want, you should make your own story. So for people who actually like my story and are friendly about their requests, I hope you have a good time. This is Persin and welcome to the show~

LV 5

Harem_fan

I had really enjoyed this up till the MC decided to be a peerage, devil, and Rias hater....it would be ok if he was put in DxD against his will but out of ALL the worlds he could go to he went to the one that focuses on the 3 mentioned themes. I read DxD fan fictions for the cannon story with some twist not for kick it in the balls and spit in its face...well that's just my opinion............

LV 2

Sesshomaru_

This guy is basically the same as issei, the author says he is mentally 15 so that is why he got affected when the old man told him about harems and stuff but that would be false the Mc is mentally the age of 30 and is going around peeping on girls like he is 12, so this is no different than the original in my opinion. Fan-fic is another perverted mess

LV 14

Adrianix1234

To be honest i have not read and probably wont read the book, but i saw a lot of low reviews for being friends with issei, so a 5 review star to balance the things, I get that there are people that doesn’t like Issei, could be various reasons, so instead of review the novel im gonna review Issei as a character Positive: Hilarious as a protagonist A Good person Would die for the people he cares about ... To be honest i thought there were more to that list of positive things, but rn i can’t think of them Negative: Probably the most annoying type of male friend to have, not only is always talking about boobs but also dragging you down by shouting perverted things so that everyone thinks you are like him He’s a pervert (Normally i wouldn’t care but it’s the type of pervert that lust after his friends girlfriends, hell he lusted after rias mother...) Never really used his potential which is annoying to watch the only technique he created was dress break, never tried to even dabble in magic of senjutsu. He’s an idiot, not like naruto type idiot were even naruto has plans, no. he’s the type of idiot that would go recklessly to the front to try to punch a mage, idk why any being with a funcional brain cant beat him, i mean really... a hologram of rias naked made out of magic, a rune that drains magic of the one that activates its in the floor, and a sword.and he’s as good as death even sacred gears can’t work without magic... Conclusion: I wouldn’t kill Issei But i would steal his boosted gear, so i would research a way to steal it without killing him, if times runs out and about to start canon idc anymore and kill him, IN case he survives without boosted gear, i would probably expulse him from the school if he tries to spy on someone i care about. (idk how would butterfly effect affects him) so if i see him on the path of becoming a rapist probably kill him to give him an honorable death before he does something canon would have hated Other than that i would probably wont even be his friend, wouldnt want to someone to connect him with me

LV 6

Kurumi21

Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

LV 3

Stay_Lazy

Definitely an interesting concept a guy with the body of kazuma in dxd it's pure genius

LV 5

Dfransginola

not bad keep up the good work [img=recommend] . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

LV 3

Vivalavistamia

You deserve a rating lol I dont know why I'm doing this even though I have no clue what DXD means or what this story is all about i'm just gonna rate it because I want to rate it for some reason/

LV 5

Daoist721221

atleast you tried........................................................................................................................................

LV 4

Thangam_Robert

Well i didn't finish reading the story but i stop at ch 5, 1)Back story is lame, the story of how he died does not match the story type of harem. he nor got a phobia of yandere instead he became stupid to court lady death. 2)Mc is very stupid and has no real life character in him, like how a normal pampered boy turn introverted and loose his common sense for no apparent reason, as this is 2D every change needs a reason and must be explained short and clear. 3) although i can see a lot of planning and preparation even your inspiration but it lack a main factor common sense on MC part and character development, i see no shred of development in all those 5 or 6 years of his life, like accepting the new reality, change in objective, determination, character interaction and mc pov . 4)The Mc is just like a puppet of writer, so please add various situations and make Mc real, short slice of life is needed for that. 5) Please improve the phasing and transitioning. that's all

LV 3

prophet_of_lore12

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