Loved the character build up and the use of words ,likewise took note of stability of updating...
I must commend the way you tend to give the reader a detailed picture of it when reading so we can imagine it....
Your romance aspect is also lit, from the use of Swift words to the turning up and all..
The action though little but was enough to get a glimpse of what you wanted us to see
Loved the character build up and the use of words ,likewise took note of stability of updating... I must commend the way you tend to give the reader a detailed picture of it when reading so we can imagine it.... Your romance aspect is also lit, from the use of Swift words to the turning up and all.. The action though little but was enough to get a glimpse of what you wanted us to see
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