She fell for a cafe owner

I personally like this novel and even though I didn’t manage to read to the end, I cant stop myself from giving my review first!! Firstly, love romance pace wise— I do admit its fast but if you compare it to reality, there are even those who jumped to conclusion of marriage and they only get to know each other for 1-2 months only! So in my relative term, it’s at a good pace. But since not everyone prefers fast romance and author is always looking out for their readers’ thoughts and reviews, then i suggest the author to adjust however they seem fit. Secondly, author need to calm themselves down before publishing. I’m not saying it in a bad way. It’s okay to compile but be sure to double check your work as there are mistakes in few paragraphs and sometimes it gives out different meaning that readers would not be able to understand. Lastly! Thank you author for sharing this novel with me. I felt at ease and calm now after reading this! It really really caught my attention and you got a subscriber! Aka collector! I’m looking forward to the future updates and your future works author!!!!

I like the characters, they seem nice and interesting and the contrast in peraonalities is fun. Such as when the cashied doesn’t get to clock out and she assumes the universe hates her. The story so far (only 4 chapters) is funny and enjoyable. However, honestly I think the romance is progressing too quickly, and if someone’s going through a hard time it’s less realistic to spill it straight away, you also wouldn’t immediatley gush over someone after being cheated on? Constructive critisism: -most romance novels are better when the romance is at a slower more natural pace, if it’s too fast paced it may seem forced. -Also, for how she spilt her “backstory” of sorts to him, it’d be more realistic if you’d: 1. Had her go in either slightly drunk causing her to spill, like she’d gone bar hopping and came here for a drink to clear her head to figure out what to do. 2. Had her go in distraught, him being attracted to her but not liking her yet, offers her a drink since “drinks help you drown your sorrow” and she lets her “backstory” loose after getting a bit tipsy.