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This is the first book I have ever read that has a concept like this. I love how you used Philippine Mythology that many of us has forgotten. As a fellow Filipino, I appreciate it and will continue reading it. Keep up the good work, author!
This is a story that comes from mythology not often looked at, and for that, the creator has done a good job of introducing people to its intricacies well.
For those who loves unique plot and story concept, then this is a must read for you guys! What I like here is the world building, like the author did a great job in terms of describing places, as well as the actions of people portrayed at every scene that makes me exactly imagine the things what I imagine them doing in my head. I also like the fact that you fused your story with Filipino culture. Being a Filipino myself, that makes me so proud and I also get to know some dialect that I have never known in my whole life. xD I think the downside of this one are just the typos only, some are too obvious that bothers me a bit. Just a little polishing of the novel will do and your story will be perfect.🔥 But ignoring that, this book deserves a recognition. Keep it up author-san. :3
Great concept of promoting local terms like katabang into the international platform! I hope this story will become a hit! It would be nice to see people reading our myth! Keep it up!
I give this novel a flat 5.0/5.0 review because of its good and intriguing story. The characters has interesting backgrounds and incorporating Philippine myths and legends is an interesting element as well. I cannot stop reading in intrigue as the story is really interesting. I definitely recommend this story, I hope you, my fellow readers give this title a try. You won't regret reading this story. That's all for my review and thank you for reading! The TradeMaker
A good read indeed! I was pleasantly surprised by the plot! Carry on releasing I can't wait to read more of it! 100% recommend.
Hey? I'm Tisha... well, I read just first 3 chapters and I already fell in love with this book. Congratulations for your achievements.🤩🤩 .
This is a challenging plot for the author. He did great building his own world and mixing the lost and forgotten mythologies of the Philippines. Kudos Kabayan.
The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .
The synopsis reeled me in. The first chapter stated mysterious scene between the three people got me more hooked. The diet joke was funny tho. lol. I am looking forward to reading more of it in future.
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Good day Readers! I hope you enjoy this novel as much as enjoy writing this! This is the first novel I have published and I thank you for the patronage! Right now, this novel is a diamond in the rough, considering the grammatical issues you might find or misspelled words. I am doing my best to edit and check the chapters as fast as I can to give you the best reading experience! I hope you enjoy this book and follow the characters in their adventure! Pugay!
I am a fan of greek mythology. I love the touch of filipino words in it. I am a filipino and I'm glad that you did that. The novel was not boring, unlike some fantasy novels that I've read. It's also informative so it's flexible. Keep it up.
One of the best themes for a book is the Underworld. It's classical and here is written very well! Loved it! I hope it will be even more interesting in the future! Keep it up!
So, after reading all the chapters I seriously loved the artwork! It's so captivating & the story will always keep you hooked for the next chapters! A classic story of fantasy romance! just loved it, and added to my library ❤️ Keep going dear writer❤️
Interesting story and mostly easy to understand. Those foreign words are my weak point though. You are doing a good job! I will await future chapters.
I like the story! The plot is interesting and innovative and you did a great job with it. There's a few tense mistakes here and there (past-tense, future-tense, etc.) but otherwise the writing quality is good!
I will give this a 5 stars! As a fellow filipino, I am loving this a lot! I have never seen an english novel that showcases philippine culture here in Webnovel! For someone like me who LOVES mythologies, the fact that it's Philippine myth is great! Continue updating, This needs to be recognized! ❤️
Its a fine chapter, although I was kind of confused. I read a few times to understand but overall, its good. Nice emotion, and nice writing, and very very nice character design
I found the synopsis quite interesting. Also I liked the fact that you used some of your countries things - myths and other things. Keep up the good work Author!!!
I really liked the plot of the story. It portrays us about the various myths around in the world, the pacing of the story is good and the build-up of the scenario is also fast online some other books. I have read till Chapter 12. My favourite character is Dex. Hope the author continue this book.
This is an amazing story! I am proud as a filipino for someone like you to showcase Philippine Mythology. The story development is impeccable. The grammar and usage of the vocabulary are very good. For those who relish in mythology and great story, Please support the author in her story as she showcase one of the great treasures of Philippines in the arts of literature.
I find this book to be fairly different from the others I’ve seen. Usually, the set of gods used for books is the Greek gods. Even then, they are loosely related. This book takes a culture I have barley heard of and incorporates it in a way that isn’t a lecture but is still a learning experience. There a few spelling errors, but nothing that makes the story hard to understand. Though, the beginning sections are a little slow.
This story is incredibly unique and fun to read! The pacing is well done and the characters are very relatable and fleshed out. Would definitely recommend giving it a read and I look forward to more!
Wow! I really like the plot! It's really interesting. You presented the characters and background world very well! I am so excited for the next chapter! Good job author 👍
I found the story intriguing as it takes us down a path that educates us on myths and the different beliefs of people from a different country and culture. There were some spelling mistakes as well as grammatical errors but the description of the characters in the story were well done. I loved how you used your editor's section to teach us the new terms you used in your novel as well.
I’m not very proficient in anything, to be fairly honest, so I find this plot, very interesting. According to the comments, and other reviews, this seems to be a story, based on Pilipino mythology, yes? I’m only done the second chapter, but I don’t think I’ll be quitting, or stopping any time soon. In fact, I think I’ll stay here for a while; I’m looking forward to your next updates. <3
I love this story. It is going places. So much original work. Keep up the amazing writing. Wow wow wow So freaking amazing I love this story. It is going places. So much original work. Keep up the amazing writing. Wow wow wow I love this story. It is going places. So much original work. Keep up the amazing writing. Wow wow wow So freaking amazing I love this story. It is going places. So much original work. Keep up the amazing writing. Wow wow wow So freaking amazinggg So freaking amazinggg
The setting was perfect the characters was well written no one thing i want the more settings of kinda reader so if you can give both the energy on showing the way of the world.
Oh wow. This story screams Filipino. So proud about this! I really liked the flow of the story and the subtle jokes. I regret reading this early cuz now I'mma have to waaaaiiit!
This is amzaing! It is not everyday that I can come across a book that has Philippine mythology in it. As a Filipino, I am only aware of the regional culture/myth that our area has. so knowledge about the other regions are scarce. Looking forward for what else this book and author have to offer. Kudos!
This is the first book I have ever read that has a concept like this. I love how you used Philippine Mythology that many of us has forgotten. As a fellow Filipino, I appreciate it and will continue reading it. Keep up the good work, author!
This is a story that comes from mythology not often looked at, and for that, the creator has done a good job of introducing people to its intricacies well.
For those who loves unique plot and story concept, then this is a must read for you guys! What I like here is the world building, like the author did a great job in terms of describing places, as well as the actions of people portrayed at every scene that makes me exactly imagine the things what I imagine them doing in my head. I also like the fact that you fused your story with Filipino culture. Being a Filipino myself, that makes me so proud and I also get to know some dialect that I have never known in my whole life. xD I think the downside of this one are just the typos only, some are too obvious that bothers me a bit. Just a little polishing of the novel will do and your story will be perfect.🔥 But ignoring that, this book deserves a recognition. Keep it up author-san. :3
Great concept of promoting local terms like katabang into the international platform! I hope this story will become a hit! It would be nice to see people reading our myth! Keep it up!
I give this novel a flat 5.0/5.0 review because of its good and intriguing story. The characters has interesting backgrounds and incorporating Philippine myths and legends is an interesting element as well. I cannot stop reading in intrigue as the story is really interesting. I definitely recommend this story, I hope you, my fellow readers give this title a try. You won't regret reading this story. That's all for my review and thank you for reading! The TradeMaker
A good read indeed! I was pleasantly surprised by the plot! Carry on releasing I can't wait to read more of it! 100% recommend.
Hey? I'm Tisha... well, I read just first 3 chapters and I already fell in love with this book. Congratulations for your achievements.🤩🤩 .
This is a challenging plot for the author. He did great building his own world and mixing the lost and forgotten mythologies of the Philippines. Kudos Kabayan.
The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .
The synopsis reeled me in. The first chapter stated mysterious scene between the three people got me more hooked. The diet joke was funny tho. lol. I am looking forward to reading more of it in future.
Reveal Spoiler Good day Readers! I hope you enjoy this novel as much as enjoy writing this! This is the first novel I have published and I thank you for the patronage! Right now, this novel is a diamond in the rough, considering the grammatical issues you might find or misspelled words. I am doing my best to edit and check the chapters as fast as I can to give you the best reading experience! I hope you enjoy this book and follow the characters in their adventure! Pugay!
I am a fan of greek mythology. I love the touch of filipino words in it. I am a filipino and I'm glad that you did that. The novel was not boring, unlike some fantasy novels that I've read. It's also informative so it's flexible. Keep it up.
One of the best themes for a book is the Underworld. It's classical and here is written very well! Loved it! I hope it will be even more interesting in the future! Keep it up!
So, after reading all the chapters I seriously loved the artwork! It's so captivating & the story will always keep you hooked for the next chapters! A classic story of fantasy romance! just loved it, and added to my library ❤️ Keep going dear writer❤️
Interesting story and mostly easy to understand. Those foreign words are my weak point though. You are doing a good job! I will await future chapters.
I like the story! The plot is interesting and innovative and you did a great job with it. There's a few tense mistakes here and there (past-tense, future-tense, etc.) but otherwise the writing quality is good!
I will give this a 5 stars! As a fellow filipino, I am loving this a lot! I have never seen an english novel that showcases philippine culture here in Webnovel! For someone like me who LOVES mythologies, the fact that it's Philippine myth is great! Continue updating, This needs to be recognized! ❤️
Its a fine chapter, although I was kind of confused. I read a few times to understand but overall, its good. Nice emotion, and nice writing, and very very nice character design
I found the synopsis quite interesting. Also I liked the fact that you used some of your countries things - myths and other things. Keep up the good work Author!!!
I really liked the plot of the story. It portrays us about the various myths around in the world, the pacing of the story is good and the build-up of the scenario is also fast online some other books. I have read till Chapter 12. My favourite character is Dex. Hope the author continue this book.
This is an amazing story! I am proud as a filipino for someone like you to showcase Philippine Mythology. The story development is impeccable. The grammar and usage of the vocabulary are very good. For those who relish in mythology and great story, Please support the author in her story as she showcase one of the great treasures of Philippines in the arts of literature.
I find this book to be fairly different from the others I’ve seen. Usually, the set of gods used for books is the Greek gods. Even then, they are loosely related. This book takes a culture I have barley heard of and incorporates it in a way that isn’t a lecture but is still a learning experience. There a few spelling errors, but nothing that makes the story hard to understand. Though, the beginning sections are a little slow.
This story is incredibly unique and fun to read! The pacing is well done and the characters are very relatable and fleshed out. Would definitely recommend giving it a read and I look forward to more!
Wow! I really like the plot! It's really interesting. You presented the characters and background world very well! I am so excited for the next chapter! Good job author 👍
I found the story intriguing as it takes us down a path that educates us on myths and the different beliefs of people from a different country and culture. There were some spelling mistakes as well as grammatical errors but the description of the characters in the story were well done. I loved how you used your editor's section to teach us the new terms you used in your novel as well.
I’m not very proficient in anything, to be fairly honest, so I find this plot, very interesting. According to the comments, and other reviews, this seems to be a story, based on Pilipino mythology, yes? I’m only done the second chapter, but I don’t think I’ll be quitting, or stopping any time soon. In fact, I think I’ll stay here for a while; I’m looking forward to your next updates. <3
I love this story. It is going places. So much original work. Keep up the amazing writing. Wow wow wow So freaking amazing I love this story. It is going places. So much original work. Keep up the amazing writing. Wow wow wow I love this story. It is going places. So much original work. Keep up the amazing writing. Wow wow wow So freaking amazing I love this story. It is going places. So much original work. Keep up the amazing writing. Wow wow wow So freaking amazinggg So freaking amazinggg
The setting was perfect the characters was well written no one thing i want the more settings of kinda reader so if you can give both the energy on showing the way of the world.
Oh wow. This story screams Filipino. So proud about this! I really liked the flow of the story and the subtle jokes. I regret reading this early cuz now I'mma have to waaaaiiit!
This is amzaing! It is not everyday that I can come across a book that has Philippine mythology in it. As a Filipino, I am only aware of the regional culture/myth that our area has. so knowledge about the other regions are scarce. Looking forward for what else this book and author have to offer. Kudos!