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[WPC SEP 2023 [Fantasy]/Revenge]
Seeing the unfair world, Zerexs wants to achieve a world without any discrimination with his tyrannical Ideal of "One Above All", where he is the only one SUPERIOR to others and everyone below him is considered to be EQUALS. He absorbed other's blood energies and saved them in his own body. But his ideas were soon crushed by an unparalleled opponent, but before he dies, he splits his total blood energy and gives it to two separate persons in hopes of reincarnate in their bodies in the near future. But the protagonist "Death" does not know of his powers, becomes a slave, and tries to become strong under his master. While other one "Fate" is fully loyal to Zerexs, and tries to awaken him in his body as soon as possible.
In the midst of all this, A girl who lost her both mother and father due to absurd reasons of this world tries to destroy it completely and wholeheartedly. That girl happens to be controlling all the characters in this story to get her desired output just like a chess game.
Will Death become the strongest being? Will Fate inherit Zerexs in his body? Or Will the girl destroy the world before? The story revolves around the three of them.
*I'm the author, and I would appreciate it if you could give your constructive feedback on my story, so I could improve myself in writing, I'm a college student, It takes 2 hours to travel to my college, I write books on those times, I feel it exciting than exhausting when people appreciate my work*
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it's a mixed feeling after reading some... The story rocks...awesome..enigmatic story. development is quite fast. It begins with a mysterious being getting greedy and then its mysterious rebirth...it's all so exciting... The writing style can improve..I mean the more you revise your chapters, the more scopes of improvement you will find... However, it does not obstruct the awesome flow of the story...It's not stagnant at all...it's always changing and flowing...and the flowing river has good water... So, this will be an excellent piece if the author keeps sharpening and revising his work. I have added to my library and I will keep reading.
Out of all the novels I've review swap, this was the best. The writing, the names do not suck. Keep it up
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As mentioned earlier by many other readers the book is great and has a lot of interesting plots. The same goes for me. Bu, it is kind of confusing how three people will pay a role. Will their fate be copied as the MC? Or will there be a twist to turn a crush into a new world? This is quite an amazing book one has made. A growing tree. Keep it up, author. Be happy with all that you hear.
So many emotions, you got me there. . I love your story, I'm just starting it and so far it gripped me, from the backstory to the main story and the part about the fire😫😫.. . My poor heart
FIVE FOOOKIN STARS MATE!!! Story and word flow: Excellent! Development: Perfect! MC: Do I need to say anything to that? Your story is captivating and immediately pulled me in. I saw some mistakes but they are easily sweeped by the strong flow of the story! Keep posting Author, and I'll keep reading. Added to my Collection! Hmmm, what else can I say? Maybe just that this story is going to be BIG! Peace :)
The cover felt slightly misleading to me. For a second I thought it would be some cyberpunk romance with a bit of action, but the synopsis and tags helped me get over it and actually into the novel, which up till what I've read it pretty decent. Nothing to call a masterpeice, but enough for you to enjoy reading on a casual basis, if only there were more chapters. The pacing I beleive is the best part of this novel and it is not too slow, and neither is it too fast, just sitting on the thin line of what feels pleasant to read. I do hope this novel gets more fleshed out characters though, It has the potential to. Amazing work so far, and keep up the good writing!
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I feel that the progression of the story was too fast for me to delve into the feeling. There are writing corrections too, but nothing that Grammarly or any writing tool can't help edit. As for the character design, I'm confused. I'm not sure whose story I am reading now, though the name Zerexs has a nice ring to it, I guess it needs more foundation. Like building his character first before progressing the story. His backstory was confusing me too, I'm not sure what the timeline is but every chapter felt like a different timeline, but the timeline is in the wrong order. Still, I can see potential.
l just started reading this book a day ago and I am enjoying it. l just love how the author writes and made it enjoyable to us readers. I'm really hooked up in these book and so far it's awesome .
One word: SWEET!!!I just love the way the MC is determined to protect the ones precious to him even though he's not exactly a good example of compassionate. Keep up the good work 👍
The story is actually really good. I love how each chapter develop and it so easy to flow with the story because it is concise and not so complicated😊. The author is doing a really great job here, and I would like to see how this story progresses.
Good story, full of mysteries that I want to unravel. Simplicity to its best but would love longer chapters💃💃💃💃Keep up the good work and looking forward to great things from you.
Wow... this book is goodgotta say, the story is fast. so I should warn you, buckle up. it snatched my interest a bit too quickly, and I couldn't put it down until the first 5 chapters. so far, evedything is great! keep qeiting author nim!!
story is great and author made an effort to explain everything and made it very simple to comprehend, really great
Everything is great and I really enjoyed it, but I think the script style for dialogue makes it a bit messy to read. I would rather FEEL the emotion coming from the characters as they are speaking and what they are emoting. Keep it up. You are doing well. I will add this to my collections.
the story is well paced, the writing style I am not used to but it is certainly interesting. The novel has a promising story, 3 chapters in and still going. keep up the good work
This story has potential, I just wish the author would write longer chapters and change his writing style to one that is more descriptive and immersive.
I'm conflicted, on one hand It shows that you're really trying with the story and it does have potencial, but on the other hand there are some questionable writing decisions like "Name: What they are saying." I don't know if I could vibe with that, also, It may just be me, but you might be going a little bit too fast with the pacing, again, it might just be me.
I'm the author, Many people appreciated my work for its simplicity and commonly pointed out that typos are the only flaw in my book, Gladly I have resolved it all with an app. If you find something serious, Let me know by pointing it out. Thank you for taking your precious time to read my book.