SOUL LAND 2 WITH POWERFULL OP

HI IT'S MY FIRST NOVEL,SO SORRY FOR MISTAKE ,AND IN THIS NOVEL THERE ARE MANY SIMILAR PLACES AND THE DESCRIPTION OF APPERANCE WAS SAME BECAUSE I DIDN'T GOOD INT,SO SORRY ,I ONLY CHANGE THE STORY WHERE I THINK IT CLOUD BE ,LIKE STARTING POINT IN TWIN MARTIAL SOUL AND SOME THING LIKE THAT
SO PLEASE ENJOY IT AND GIVE ME COMMENTS ABOUT IT