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Lu Fujin a boy who loved anime and video games had a weak body since childhood and knew he would die young. When he died he was reborn in the body of Shen Hua, a 12 year old boy with no talent for cultivation and no support. In a world where people control the elements he will have to fight to survive and get stronger.
"Please don't kill me, I'm your brother, you wouldn't kill your brother, right?" desperate Shen Mu begged his brother to let him live.
"Kill you? How could I will do that, I'm not a monster." Shen Hua smiled kindly at his brother.
'Wait I'll make you pay for making me beg something of you.', Shen Mu can't help but rejoice at the idea of revenge against his brother.
Seeing his brother's eyes and with the same smile, Shen Hua continued "Why would I kill you? You're so handsome and delicate, I'm sure many brothels will want to buy you for a good price. Take it from here."
Shen Mu was dragged out while cursing his brother.
"Bring the next."
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Everything is good and nice. The story have a little grammatical error but overall I like it.. It had an interesting and clean plot line. Good job author and have a nice day.
Other than the few corrections that the grammar could go under, the plotline appears promising so far, and it is quite captivating for someone like me, who doesn't usually go for such plotlines.
I like Shen Hua, the MC. The plotline is promising. The author did a good job. I suggest editing it a bit, but other than that all is quite good.
The plotline of this novel is very good. It doesn't matter if it resembles TDG or not. The characters are also quite good as well as the worldbuilding. The only issue is the writing quality which must have been a result of translation. Apart from that, great book so far.
Classic novel of cultivation, with protagonist reincarnated in a new world. Fun to read. With a few typos, but it doesn't bother reading too much.
I'm writing this in a spoiler because I'm going to offer a little constructive criticism and I don't want this displayed at the top of your reviews. You need to do a lot of work on grammar and proofreading. The number of mistakes makes the story difficult to follow. I'm sure you can improve rapidly if you apply yourself, but the first chapter especially should have flawless grammar. I personally recommend getting a book called "The Elements of Grammar" and reading it cover-to-cover. What is your first language, by the way? I'm looking for people to translate my story into languages other than English to reach a wider audience, so if you'd like to take a shot at it, please let me know :) Happy writing and keep up the good work!
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It follows some of the basic Chinese Webnovel cliches that everyone here likes, the story flow is okay. Now the main thing for me is the mc, for some reason I really wanna know what he'll do next. The plot is also intriguing, and since it's still in the early stages, I can't say much more aside from you should try reading this.