Strongest System in the Dragon Ball World ( Volume 2 have to wait )

LV 3

Isvan_Devi

I like the story before this but this one, You were write here too rushed, like you just throw everything on your mind without trying to see the deeper meaning in it. All in all i just don't enjoy this story anymore

LV 5

Dog_That_Eat_Flame

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LV 4

FAustVL

Yes. This was my own review of myself . I worked and write so this much is all i can do for now. I'm doing this because i like it. So it's didn't have a good stability but i think i won't be able to throw it away incomplete.