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Write a reviewThis time we meet with small protagonist, 4 years old blind prince, whose body is possesed by autor, who wrote the novel. Thanks to his knowledge as autor he is able to use a lot of opportunities. He is op character who dominated the world he created.
Its great so far (to me at least) the mc is smart the progress I good ................................................................................................................................. . . .
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Good novel but we need more chapters and i hope there will be more war scenes and cool technologies ,trump cards and more system summon and new function of the system thats all thank you author hope more chap to come.
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It's a good story, when will you continue? I have waited a long time, but I haven't updated it. Could this novel be finished? I love this story, so it would be a pity to end it.
Reveal SpoilerWell I want to ask our beloved story writer that when the heavens are we getting our updates .... We need an update can't wait anymore my heart can't handle the anticipation...... π€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺ
I found this one lacking soul. The system was relatively uninteresting. Flat characters. Several inconsistencies. Pretty mediocre English grammar overall. Too often the MC is simply receiving reports of events that happen offscreen. It makes sense storywise but as a reader its the classic trap of telling the reader rather than showing. On the positive side, the pacing is quick, so time passes quickly. And while not original the premise has potential. I've read worse, but this one one didn't have much appeal in the first dozen or so chapters, making it hard to continue when there are better options.
Wow, really wish there were more than 45 chapters when I found this. Read it all in a flash and so want more. The characters are entertaining and it's a nice world setting and has some refreshing twists you don't often see. Outside of the occasional spelling and grammar errors it's a very fine read and I hope the author returns to it soon.
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Read this novel..... Has huge potential and I wanna give the maximum rating but updating is a bit irregular..... Please do something author san.......
------No spoiler, read and you make your own opinion------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Β Β Β Β --- ______---
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Reveal SpoilerDropped it, the logic is inexistent and not consistent, also the interactions between people are really bad, it's either making fun of people or being impressed
Hope more is released soon. Great story and itβs a mix of something old with something new. Great read.......................................
It's pretty good, I think Well...personally, its good enough for me to write a good review, so I guess, yeah this novel is pretty good I support
I just like doing this for some 3rd rate mc and seems like a rip off of my novel's extra if you don't know my novels extra search it in novel updates one of the best korean novel after every one else is a returnee and solo levelling
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I reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy love the story the chracters are great the world build is good to keep up the good work.
Major plot holes in the prologues which is already a red flag. Many more plot holes are in the story and even though the MC wrote the story and characters, he blames them for being rude. Some small grammar problems. It just gets rather boring trying to ignore all the plot holes. And how hypocritical the MC is.
Awesome is the word to describe the novel. It's very much engaging and entertainment.....................................................................................................................................
Cliche but not too cliched, not the best but really good, its awesome, i can only mention 2 or 3 books that are better than this. Need few edits here n there
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A bit mediocre. The story development and outline is nice, it's a good idea. It's held back mainly by interactions of the characters and poor grammar/sentence structure. The main character comes off kinda dumb because of the need to vocalise obvious things and get confirmation, he doesn't make links between obvious things that I could do at 9, not to mind an author thinking on his own world. Internal thought (monologue) paragraphs would cut down bad conversations and allow us seeing him understand things on his own. The author seems to be spelling it out slowly in boring ways, making everyone sound dumb. The only person whoms character seems correct is the one year old divine beast because... well... he's one.
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This time we meet with small protagonist, 4 years old blind prince, whose body is possesed by autor, who wrote the novel. Thanks to his knowledge as autor he is able to use a lot of opportunities. He is op character who dominated the world he created.
Its great so far (to me at least) the mc is smart the progress I good ................................................................................................................................. . . .
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Good novel but we need more chapters and i hope there will be more war scenes and cool technologies ,trump cards and more system summon and new function of the system thats all thank you author hope more chap to come.
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It's a good story, when will you continue? I have waited a long time, but I haven't updated it. Could this novel be finished? I love this story, so it would be a pity to end it.
Reveal SpoilerWell I want to ask our beloved story writer that when the heavens are we getting our updates .... We need an update can't wait anymore my heart can't handle the anticipation...... π€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺ
I found this one lacking soul. The system was relatively uninteresting. Flat characters. Several inconsistencies. Pretty mediocre English grammar overall. Too often the MC is simply receiving reports of events that happen offscreen. It makes sense storywise but as a reader its the classic trap of telling the reader rather than showing. On the positive side, the pacing is quick, so time passes quickly. And while not original the premise has potential. I've read worse, but this one one didn't have much appeal in the first dozen or so chapters, making it hard to continue when there are better options.
Wow, really wish there were more than 45 chapters when I found this. Read it all in a flash and so want more. The characters are entertaining and it's a nice world setting and has some refreshing twists you don't often see. Outside of the occasional spelling and grammar errors it's a very fine read and I hope the author returns to it soon.
lebih banya bab lebih banya bab lebih banya bab lebih banya bab lebih banya bab lebih banya bab lebih banya bab lebih banya bab lebih banya bab
Reveal Spoilerππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Muito massa, sΓ³ que podia ter mais cap's e cara naooooooooooo faz essa merda de perfil baixo isso Γ© muito clichΓͺ e chato, mais no geral tΓ‘ top,SEM PERFIL BAIXOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Read this novel..... Has huge potential and I wanna give the maximum rating but updating is a bit irregular..... Please do something author san.......
------No spoiler, read and you make your own opinion------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Β Β Β Β --- ______---
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Reveal SpoilerDropped it, the logic is inexistent and not consistent, also the interactions between people are really bad, it's either making fun of people or being impressed
Hope more is released soon. Great story and itβs a mix of something old with something new. Great read.......................................
It's pretty good, I think Well...personally, its good enough for me to write a good review, so I guess, yeah this novel is pretty good I support
I just like doing this for some 3rd rate mc and seems like a rip off of my novel's extra if you don't know my novels extra search it in novel updates one of the best korean novel after every one else is a returnee and solo levelling
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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I reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy love the story the chracters are great the world build is good to keep up the good work.
Major plot holes in the prologues which is already a red flag. Many more plot holes are in the story and even though the MC wrote the story and characters, he blames them for being rude. Some small grammar problems. It just gets rather boring trying to ignore all the plot holes. And how hypocritical the MC is.
Awesome is the word to describe the novel. It's very much engaging and entertainment.....................................................................................................................................
Cliche but not too cliched, not the best but really good, its awesome, i can only mention 2 or 3 books that are better than this. Need few edits here n there
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
A bit mediocre. The story development and outline is nice, it's a good idea. It's held back mainly by interactions of the characters and poor grammar/sentence structure. The main character comes off kinda dumb because of the need to vocalise obvious things and get confirmation, he doesn't make links between obvious things that I could do at 9, not to mind an author thinking on his own world. Internal thought (monologue) paragraphs would cut down bad conversations and allow us seeing him understand things on his own. The author seems to be spelling it out slowly in boring ways, making everyone sound dumb. The only person whoms character seems correct is the one year old divine beast because... well... he's one.
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?