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Frank Callahan is looking for love on the moon. He risks everything to get back to Moon Base Alpha and the woman he loves.
Unfortunately the woman he loves doesn't feel the same. Frank is heart broken and nearly ends it all.
Frank is the first person to be kicked off the moon, the first stowaway on a trip to the moon, the first homeless man on the moon and that all happens in the first ten pages.
After decades of technological advancement and hundreds of missions, Moon Base Alpha has reached a level of self-sufficiency. The first hotel on the moon is about to open creating a burgeoning economy. Frank sees opportunities if he can keep from getting sent back to Earth.
The night of the hotels pre-opening gala, the base is invaded by The Sons of Khan who want to take control of the base and future opportunities.
Frank must use his skills, wits, and abilities he didn’t know he had to help save his friends and Moon Base Alpha.
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I’ve read a lot of stories, but Your storytelling is rich and immersive, and the way you capture emotion and setting makes it feel like a living world. I kept thinking how amazing it was, the tone, pacing, and character moments all fit that format so naturally. This story really has the kind of depth and energy that could shine visually too. I also have a few Ideas on how we could enhance it visually if you are open to exploring them, we can talk about it.