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The King's organization, one of the most powerful entities of this universe, with higher than thousands of galaxies and billions of warriors under its command. The person who can control this behemoth, the next inheritor of King's organization, who will be crowned as the 7th King, just decimated an entire civilization and went into hiding.
While the entire universe is seeking for him, he is on his course to carry a quiet life on an "uncivilized" planet at the rim of the universe called Earth, his home.
But nothing progresses according to one's plans.
This is the story of Paul. Whose only mottos are
"I want to live a Carefree life," and
"All will be fine until you provoke me"
But there are a lot of "Coincidences" in this universe which forces him never to realize his mere dream to be a normal person.
********* If you are looking for an MC where he goes from weak to strong, this is not for you. Here the MC is Super OP from the beginning********
* There may be some grammatical errors. I'll update it soon. Thank you*
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From OP to an average MC. How unique 😳 Usually, I see stories that have their characters start from weak to strong. This one seems to be quite interesting too even though that is not the case. Quite a unique character design indeed. The flow of the story and the pace are good so far. Hadn't read that much yet but I could already tell that this would be a fun ride! 😊
Sci-Fi is not really my cup of tea but this is great and interesting. The sotry is very immersive and I could see that you Author did a lot of background research for this. I really like this and I'm going to add this to my library and wait for more chapters!
The story is promising for a sci fiction and there are light humor too. Author english is better than most of the stories around here. Readers should give this awesome story a chance as it has colorful characters and you will feel immerse into it.
I always leave five stars on books because as a writer, it's the only thing I could do to support other ones. But for you, it's kind of a well-deserved five stars since your book really shows promise. It's a great read! I'm not going to lie, your book is really immersive but there are a few things that you could still improve on, albeit minor ones: First, you could improve on your information. Don't rush things such as the evolver levels. You shouldn't have done that in chapter five since it would only look lazy to other readers. I've written books with power ranking before and it's always easy to snippet explanations during the story and work your way from there. like "Wow! You're a universal?! That's the highest rank anyone could get! I'm only a Level 9 evolver so I don't know." or something like that. And then from there, work on explaining the other ranks in the next chapters until the readers get a vague idea on it. When it comes to writing, it's always best to even out your information so your readers will always be engaged, not releasing massive amounts of info on one chapter and then no new information on the next. That way, your readers would consistently ask themselves what's going to happen next and continue reading. It's still a constant improvement for me though hehe. Second: Grammar, there were parts where you said "didn't me(e)t" or x369('s) whole body (I included the correct forms in brackets). These are only minor mistakes but readers can get particular about it. I know it sucks not having an editor but you could always avail of apps like Grammarly that would help you with your small grammatical errors. These are only minor mistakes though so you only need a little bit of improvement. Honestly, though, your vocabulary is really awesome and I know you'll get far when it comes to writing. (I also like anime, web novel, webtoons, light novels, mangas, dramas, etc etc ehehe so I relate to ya. Cheers!) I'd suggest going through your chapters when you have free time and just edit it. I do it sometimes but I still miss like a lot of minor mistakes. Phew~! Third: Dialogues. I don't know if it's just your writing style but putting a comma after dialogues is new to me. I've never seen anyone do it and for a good reason. I guess there are etiquettes when it comes to writing dialogues... I'm not sure but it doesn't look professional. Now don't misunderstand. I like your book, I even added it to my library since it's very promising. I hope you don't find any of my reviews as offensive but as a means to improve your skills. I want to support your book as much as I could since I really like it. Keep on writing, keep on improving, and keep on moving forward, because that's what authors do. ^ ^ I know you'll make it big someday. Good luck!
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A sci-fi story every reader can look forward to, the immersive story immediately sets you in its captivating world. The story plays out properly and characters are quite interesting. I would advise that the author would properly set in the dialogues using spacing. Overall the issues are quite minor and can easily be overlooked as you keep reading. Would recommend to sci-fi fans. Good job author!
Excellent story, we'll write as well, I am not a fan of sci fic, but this story got me interested. Not going to lie, the story has potential, and I love the way it gathers the reader's attention. Excellent work, author, and keep up!
I'm just read 8 chapters and totally into this. Though that Pendragon one is an info dumb. Author did a lot of background research to make the story close to the facts. keep it up!!!!!!!
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
Although I am not a sci-fi fan, your story is really immersive. When I started reading the first chapter, I never thought I would be be hooked up with this story. I am going to hang on and read further chapters. This story is very well written and perfectly paced. Although there are some info dump like in chp 5, but it is an essential part of the story to understand the characters and the story flow. The character design and world setting is topnotch. Overall this is a good read. Good work author. :)
Hi. Ur sci-fi story is interesting and it's descriptive which makes me read the next, next chapter. I nearly going to finish till 12chapters and I hope you will update soon : )
The plot is really good. I haven't read many sci fi books so I don't have much to compare this with but I liked the book :) Also, there are many punctuation errors especially with your periods and commas so you should go through the book and fixed that. Keep writing, author!
Interesting story, so was the character. It was actually more interesting for me to read this novel than usual because I have also written a novel where the MC is extremely OP at the start but the setting was different.
Nice book. If you are a sci-fi fan like i am then please read this book. I quite liked the fact that this book has a rich section of vocabulary and I found no grammatical errors. Overall it is amazing.
Wow, just wow!! This is an amazing read. It is really different from the ones I have read before. You have done a great job author! Highly recommended book!
The second I read your story's synopsis, I'm all like, "Hmm. Story about kings? As in royals? That should be interesting." When I read the book, it's like the words are exploding everywhere or something! Call me dramatic, but i'm totally loving this book of yours. It has some freshness which is great as well. I'm still reading so,,,yeh, i'm gonna go and do that. I hope that you publish more chapters soon though. Good luck!
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