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There is a legend in the thirteen continents which is not known by ordinary people or experts only by people who are top of the world.
"when the Black Cloth Descend You Will Be Immortal"
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I will be shamelessly writing the first review. Hi, this my book (original not fanfiction) this book will be a mystery book(like emperor domination) not like other books so it will be hard to write so I will keep 3 chapters per week, for now, please take care of me.
This is a review of the first two chapters. The author is imaginative, but needs help editing. The background of both the main character and the setting are given succinctly. The plot advances from the the main character’s motivation to his first steps down his path. There are numerous run-on sentences. There are also missing words: verbs, articles of speech, and prepositions. The story would benefit from editing.
Well, I read your book its good for a newbie to write book full mystery and fantasy without boring the readers continue writing and improving mistakes make a person better.