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So begins my journey, from death to life and everything in between. I have taken over the body of Nikolai Nightingale, and I will learn the path of a true alchemist with the genetics of monsters and with my by my side. For a true alchemist is never mostly harmless...
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Good story. Nothing really to complain about. Mc has emotion and feels when he does something. Mixed story dark fantasy, systems/ recantation ecc Slice of life ****** but complex story, somewhat relaxing, violent. Pros Good mc Good story flow Dark story line that is interesting and not completely creepy. No rape hopefully it stays that way. Cons Needs more chapters maby the complete book. It is a system novel so at some point ether the story will become mundane or seriously contrived. Considering how good the author is he can ether have pland the hole book from beginning to end for a amazing story. Or if this is an updating story type it will probably cap out around chapter 500. Ha I am complaining about something that doesn’t exist, that is how good this book is. To the author success and a good read for me.
So far it is a great beginning of a story. Well above average with respect of web/light novels; it has a different 'feel' from most, hard to say what it is exactly at this point. Looking forward to see how the story progresses!
Started off good, there are a lot of things about the story that I like. Going to give you 5's although I think story development and to an extent writing quality could use some improvement. Mainly concerned about some of the elements that have been getting mixed in lately. Like why is the really cool little dude all of a sudden a cat..? Kinda ruined that character for me, maybe it can be redeemed? Also some cringey/tropey stuff getting mixed in. Like talking about/foreshadowing to the 13 year old girl getting porked by the MC, making STD medicine (whats next, face cream?), etc. Also feels like the MC doesn't have any adversity, the "super overpowered overcomes everything easily" type gets old real fast. The writing quality is generally good, but sometimes it's hard to picture whats going on mentally. Like the 5v1 fight scene, or trying to figure out who's talking sometimes? Would love to see the story moving out of this.. "training/loli/golem dress up/face cream" arc, and see it stick to a darker theme, moving out into the world, the really cool system, the cool not-suddenly-a-cat minions, a not super OP MC who sometimes experiences adversity, and avoid cringey/tropey stuff in general. That's my two cents, hope you continue writing this.
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I love this already the first couple chapters build up to becoming an mc who could grow to become a king I am excited to see how he goes about it I also hope he starts to a badass :D
A very nice rpg style story with reincarnation and a game like system. overall a fun read. the updates are a little slow. after a few chapters , I think , there was a jump in explanation of some stuff, but it was negligible.
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I like this already. You have my support and blessing. ........................................................................................................