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Five hundred years ago, King Az'artan died on his death bed he and his three sons were told by a Jin'qua that in ten years time a great and unknown evil the likes that the universe of Tyilingariea had never seen will admerge but also six heros of legend will come each from a different universe. A human Kyle Rider, a bounty hunter Kain Riddle, a princess Kai're and a pair of twins Nina and Lucas Silverstar. each will play a role in saving this world as well as every Multiverse in existice in this five book epic
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Write a reviewHi this is the author Brandon Gould This is my very first book I ever wrote I started it when I was in High School and finshed it when I was 22. so I would like it if you guys could tell me if you like it and I would like honest critue if possible but be nice. I also wrote Demonsong if you are interested
Author Brandongould1994
Interesting story, It did manage to catch my attention. And here is my criticism 1- You need to describe the scene and How the characters look. I readed the First chapter and I didn't know How any of the characters there looked like, and that was confusing as hell. When the First female character appeared in book one, I didn't even know If she was an old lady or Just a ***** woman. And you also need to make things more clear when describing them. 2- You need to work on the characters conversations and talks. Instead of Just putting the dialogue in the middle of the pharagraph, you should give them some space. For example: "Hey, How are you?" "I'm fine thanks."