The Emperor of Chaos

LV 4

BlackStar_BH

Your book deserves a 5-star review, I really like how the story unfolds until now. But you need to tell us about the cultivation base of the protagonist.

LV 1

spain_aymane

I am loving the chapters you're posting bro. The world development is good and the characters are freaking amazing. I would like lots and lots of chapters in the future. It has limitless potential. Keep up the good work 👍

Overall the first chapter is good after the small mistakes start your effort we are waiting for the next chapter you must make a cover for the novel Goood[img=recommend]

LV 4

Daoist_ARK

Can anyone recommend some books with check in system with a modern setting where they get instantly rich

LV 1

XXGSWAI

Loving the development so far, not too many cliches and tropes, and a few scenes actually made me laugh. Few mistakes here and there nothing too major though I would recommend reading your chapter before or after publishing it.

Thank you for these chapters. I really heard that you are wonderful, my boy. I hope you will be treated more fairly so that you can continue to work. Thank you. Have a good time. We are waiting for the next one ❤️

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LV 10

bahtataymane

Good chapter keep it up we are waiting for the next chapter to find out what happens with Lin Hai And Lin Hai will die in the next chapter? 👍

LV 1

Toufik_El_Ochy

In terms of writing, you are slightly above average, but in terms of developing the story, you are good and continue with steadfastness and a little good character design. He looks more like an ordinary trainee than a hero of the story, but I think you will change him after he gets out of the abyss. In general, this is my current assessment. I wish you success and continue on. Create chapters. [img=coins]

Hello writer, my current rating for your novel will be 6/10. The way of narrating the events is very good, but you still lack world building and training levels, and you have to write the chapters more quickly. You are good. Continue in this way.l am sure it will be an exceptional novel. Goood

Good chapter keep it up we are waiting for the next chapter to find out what happens with Lin Hai And Lin Hai will die in the next chapter? 👍

LV 2

The_King_MT

Hello guys, I wanted to start an unprecedented fictional novel. I don't know if I will continue on this difficult path or not, but I will do my best for the novel to impress you.