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~Harun had just arrived at the leaf village by order of the 3rd hokage who she had never met and wasn't planing to either.
~All she rembered was the name Orochimaru, wherever she came from he would know she had to find him.....somehow
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It's a light read. It's good so far but there are a lot of grammatical errors. They can be fixed by going through the chapters once. The author has done a good job. All the best!
It is a very engaging story so far; the chapter introduced an interesting MC and a compelling suspenseful plot. I am interested to find out more! I have watched Naruto and would like to see how this author changes the plot. As there are few chapters to comment on world development and character design, I can not comment a lot on them, but they seem to be going in the right direction. I appreciate the information at the end of chapters. Well done!
Its review time, ok im going to put it ou there my spelling is awful😭😭but i try im currently editing, and finish up a few chapter before continuing😊. I think the character Harun is pretty good.
As a self-proclaimed weeb and a fan of shounen anime and manga, I quite enjoy fanfics of those famous anime and i like how you put your own spin to it, i really can't say much yet considering that there are a few chapters but i will certainly be looking forward at this one :>
This story is really entertaining and very impressive, the author seems to be a really creative person and im sure they will go places with this creativity in life. I love you uni!❤️❤️
This story is intriguing so far. I really love Naruto and I want to see how the author changes up the script. I'm looking forward to interesting developments. Character interactions so far are realistic, you really get the sense of who they are and their motivations. Altogether its pretty well done, but I need more chapters
It a very nice anime/comics. The synopsis is short. It's not showing the concept. If you add more in synopsis it's help to catch readers attention. Good job. Keep going.
We are fighting dreamers takami wo mezashite Fighting dreamers narifuri kamawazu Fighting dreamers shinjiru ga mama ni Oli oli oli oh-! just go my way! Right here right now (bang!) Buppanase like a dangan liner! Right here right now (burn!) Buttakitteku ze get the fire! Right here right now (bang!) Buppanase like a dangan liner! Right here right now (burn!)
Just 3 chapters so can't be sure about story development yet but so far i like it even from all the other fanfic because it wont skip in one go or become too much easy. because easy is very good but too much aint. thanks and update it more.
I really enjoyed it; this was a fun read! A suggestion would be to make sure the grammar is accurate, as it can be a little choppy at times. Other than that, great work!
This novel is the most amazing novel that I have read so far! I was really looking for a novel that could bring me to the sky just by his words and sentences, but now I had found it! I love the novel! And I'm itching for more chapters! I want more chapters!!!