The Fourth Era

With the rise of a tyrant, Setia Conroy sets out to remove him from his throne, and start a new and equal era.

This will be a collection of different changes that I make to this story. Whether it be a change to the point of view, or just a whole overhaul to the story in reference to grammar and the such. Please leave your thoughts in the paragraphs, and any general improvements in the chapter comments. Once new drafts are up let me know which you like more.