/ Fantasy / The Lost Flame
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The story of Ziro, a boy who knew not of himself, or his origins. Begins to seek the truth of his origins after his foster family is mercilessly killed.
This is the first story I've published here and made, hoping to work on it more and will be happy to hear feedback.
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I think, looking at the premise, it reminds me of an xianxia story simillar to I think stellar transformations with the sort of ray of power, but also I think a few other somewhat popular stories have a similar start. It seems like it has potential, and a somewhat clear scaling of power and hints towards different archetypes the main character will progress through. Overall I think it has potential but will follow for the next few chapters in order to have a solid review.