The Never Ending Hallway

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kevin_dooly

I do not know where to begin with this story. It was amazing! The whole story was completely thought through. I loved the characters and the different personalities they all had. The whole background of the past was completely unforeseen. I absolutely loved the ending.

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storyxx

The story was well executed and planned out. The theme runs very nicely with the story. I do love how it was all part of Clover's imagination. That was a real curve ball that you threw at us, the readers.

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lolstory

Amazing! Great story! I loved each part and thought that you did an awesome job! I like to read stories because I can not really write that good. I love seeing small authors trying to do their best to get their work out in the world.

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SCMC

I really like the title and how the title is literally the entire foundation of this work of art. The characters behaviors are well thought out and developed and they each add their own little part of the story. I do, however, wish to see another ending to this story where, SPOILERS, Clover and Kat drive to the station and the whole situation is real.

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fred_greg

This story was incredible!!! I loved the suspense that you, the author, have created! The ending caught me off guard, ngl. The story was great! I can't wait to see another one!

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storylover123

The story was very interesting. I enjoyed reading it. I love the ending and the plot twist! The characters have different personalities, which adds to the overall story. I think that way that it was written was interesting as well.

This was a nice short thriller. The story is very linear and simple but still a good read. The dialog was strange at some points but I never got too confused to figure out what was happening. Great story overall.

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NoahReads3

Amazing. I loved this short story. It had me on the edge of my seat and I couldn’t stop reading it. The ending is a complete plot twist and I didn’t expect it at all. Loved the characters and how they had their own personalities.

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noel_streef

Nice little horror story. I enjoyed reading it. It seemed like a well developed short story. I am very pleased with how it ended. It was not that expected and that is probably the reason why I enjoyed it.

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caren_kerin

Another great read. I should expect nothing less. Again, the ratings don't let me say much without it being repetitive. Anyways, I do agree with what those other readers have said. The ending was very unexpected. I enjoyed reading it very much.

This story is really short compared to your other one. That does not mean it was not good though. I really enjoy reading little horror stories like this one. Great ending.

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dereads

Another fantastic story you have written. I love how you twisted the ending into something that was not even considered!!! Dang! I got goosebumps while reading this!

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HAstory

Great story. I think it was a very well developed plot. I really enjoyed the little scares as well. I thought it was great. The characters were awesome, too. I liked the ending, I thought it was going to be completely different than what it actually was.