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The writing is better than the first part which says that author(Haji🙂) is performing well by putting all his scenes in a beautiful and lovely way. Excited for another part of his story. You all must read it.... Deserves good ratings ❤️
It us a rela story on some one's life and hope it will match with some others also. The writer aka Haji is reting his own real life story just by changing few names 😂.
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Really it's amazing loved it thnks fr giving us such amazing story need more early waiting fr the next part to arrive....[img=recommend][img=recommend]
not because of the line I give 5stars... [img=faceslap] it's because of the hard work and the "EFFORTS" of my Brother. Keep Growing man !! God Bless
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The story is getting more interesting with every part and seems real and i always appreciate the choice of words and the language so keep it up and am waiting for the next part
Excellent bro excellent Really nice story. Keep it up. This story gives e real sense to the reader. Keep going with your writing one day you will shine as a writer 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😊😊.
The story line was great as always and the choice of words too it really makes a great pass time story and it is getting really interesting so keep it up
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Awesome bro. This story match someone's real life incidents. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻. Keep going bro. One day you will be a professional writer 😊 😊 😊 I hope you will
It was great as always as i say the language is very good and the storyline too tho so keep it up as they do make a great time pass and waiting for the next part
It was really a great story...the language specially was very captivating and of course the story line so keep it up writing these stories they make a great time pass
From where you leant to write this story. 😳😳😳. What a lovely story bro. I think one day you will be a writer . Haji this things ra very much realistic to some one's life bro. 🥺🥺👍🏻👍🏻
Ki lagcha guru it's not Macdonalds still I am loving it 😍😀😄😊👌😁😍😀😄😊👌😁😍😀😄😊👌😁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
It was a really good story and i am eagerly waiting for the next part to come as soon as possible and just keep it up like this writing good stories which make a really good time pass
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It was a really great story just like a real life experience like it really happens when you are about to confess your feelings to someone so it was a great feeling reading such a story and i am eagerly waiting for the next part to come as soon as possible
Goood . It's very awesome Jks U Å