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Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System.
1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc
First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve.
2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments.
3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again.
4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration.
5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension.
6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast.
7. Will try to add humour.
8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read.
9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add.
10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded.
11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself.
Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness.
I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord.
discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm
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I liked the work, it has potential but some details are missing. How could you describe the fights, the scenarios, the characters, etc. In the same way that you describe *** scenes ... and slow the development of the MC. Of course, I don't know if you made this novel with the intention of being R-18, or did the work to be the same, you're writing with MC having *** and skipping several layers of cultivation at once, but for me, if you don't did just R-18 and a super fast development, at least consider some suggestions and maybe read some works on cultivation to help you write. Improve your work. I made this comment to help the author to
I liked the work, it has potential but some details are missing. How could you describe the fights, the scenarios, the characters, etc. In the same way that you describe *** scenes ... and slow the development of the MC. Of course, I don't know if you made this novel with the intention of being R-18, or did the work to be the same, you're writing with MC having *** and skipping several layers of cultivation at once, but for me, if you don't did just R-18 and a super fast development, at least consider some suggestions and maybe read some works on cultivation to help you write. Improve your work. I made this comment to help the author to improve the work from my point of view, I hope this comment helps you.
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