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A young man far from home finds himself in a world of heroes and villains, and is granted the power to control all...
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what i like the most about this story is your's way of writing is this the only story that you have writed ? if no:GIVE ME THE SOURCE :))))
Writing Quality - 4 Stability Of updates - 5 Story Development - 4 Character Design - 4 World Background - 5 Overall - 4.2 The character is awesome and I am mostly satisfied and he is channelling his inner Thanos pretty well but should he really threaten All Might with death. This is illogical. I know All Might is a softy and he won't be expelled but even Bakugou doesn't threaten teachers in UA and Nezu or Aizawa may note his character and take these things seriously and All Might sweating at his threats ( the guy has literally decades of combat experience). Man, I know your character is OP but he is becoming too OP which will make the fic really boring. Many MHA fictions writers never finish their fics cuz they made their characters too OP at the start and don't know what to improve. Why is he getting angry when he knows that he can just heal Izuku's wounds after the fight. Besides, he shouldn't have interfered in the fight. Izuku winning the fight regardless of his injuries in canon is part of Izuku's character growth.
i dunno about others but i have read about 15 chapters and quite liked it would recommend to any1 who wants to read bnha fic+ there is no foreknowledge on mcs part so it isnt very cliched
A nice novel ...........................................................................................................................................
So far the story is progressing quite well. The character is somewhat interesting and isn't bland. The plot it's self is fairly basic, however with the new addition of Ghosts it may make this fic better.
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Writing its good - Stability its good too - story development its not that great, its just following the plot of mha with oc, - character design its not that great, " mob , really, its a saitama with hair , dont like his design " world background - well , nothing. my reviw its a good diary, the story doenst have interactions, its jut the mc telling u a history , so a diary, doenst show reactions of those around, ( like i said its a good diary, but sry i dont have motivation to continue reading, maybe in future if u resolve this proble, or if its that what u like on u writing, but good luck )
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