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Chloe MacCartney has a tragic past. At a young age, she lost her parents and the last thing her mother left for her was a mysterious card that opens a door in the underground.
Years later, misfortune continued to follow her. Slandered by her fiance and robbed by her cousin, Chloe lost everything that she had.
Left with nothing but the mysterious card, Chloe found herself face to face with the door at the underground. What mysteries would she be able to unlock?
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uhm i can say that your a novice novel writer but you the plot is interesting to me so yeah maybe ill keep reading it when there's an update you should read other novels to spice up and improve your writing
So far, I found the plot interesting. As for the writing quality, there's always a room for improvement. Always strive to become a better. 🥰💖🥰
The dream sequence as an opening was good (guilty, I wrote the same thing in my novel 😅) The plot and title were interesting to make readers look into the story. I hope you continue to improve your writing
The plot is good and promising, I hope the author can continue updating so we could see more of Chloe's journey!
I checked the synopsis and the first chapter and I can say that you built the interest to hook ur readers already which is great, continue this novel, you have my full support!
I see that you made another story at a short time but the quality of the writing is bad Im a fellow writer but I know some basic like puting a gupble quotes and stuff