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THIS STORY ALL OF THIS STORY one of the most fxcking brilliant stories I have read so far in my life. I fxcking love this story π€©ππ€© dear author, I'm emotionally unstable to but all the best people are, especially when they are self aware of being emotionally unstable. π
this story is a wonderful rollercoaster of emotions, perfectly written, brilliantly thought out. This novel has no wasted detail, overdrawn out arch or scene, everything is is well blended and every detail world together to make the whole story even better, in some ways the story even beats solo leveling and supreme magus. I'm read up to the latest and all I can say is, if you're just starting this novel or you're about to start , you're in for a treat, because this story will keep you wanting more from beginning to end. Amazing work author!! I hope this gets an anime or at least character designs in form of nfts in the nearest future.
i read somewhere that this resembles solo leveling so I got interested but why of narration and cringe dialogues made my head ache...i read till 100 chapters and now dropped ..
Read this within hours.π Captures several lores with stunning accuracy It's a cocktail of gods, dragons and demons. Yummy!!!!!!!π
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This story was honestly the best Iβve read on this app. The world design and characters are all fleshed out very well in my opinion. The only issue i had was the occasional misspelling or incorrect name. I give it a 10/10 for you readers out there. Remember, Arnold is beyond a madlad
Tip: Never assume your reader knows what your talking about, unless your talking about something that is common knowledge. Like in the synopsis you randomly brought in "paladins" can be confusing for some readers. Don't gotta use my advice, but I recommend you do. Good book π
So I thought the concept would be interesting but its immediately ruined by a cliche system. Writing quality is poor but somewhat understandable. Maybe English is not authorβs first language and/or little time is spent editing. A few word choices suggest the influence of English from India. (Just a neutal observation. Could be wrong and does not matter for the rating) But thatβs not the point. The writing goes through cliche plot points with insufficient description as quickly as possible. This leaves readers with the impression things are illogical. Chapters are very short. Also, asking readers to vote on what happens in the story so early on is simply a recipe for a disordered plot. I read a couple dozen chapters hoping it could improve but I have to give up. I wouldnβt normaly rate it but the reviews have clearly been manipulated by someone spamming 5 stars.
This book was an AMAZING read. I canβt wait for the next one!! I for sure recommend you to read. The characters, the scenes were all written absolutely wonderfully
Plot is similar to solo leveling but different at the same time mc has a sick sister instead has a system and he is a porter instead of an adventurer so he has a worst background
I love how ther is the incorporation of multiple mythologies and how in early chapters you used definitions and backstories to help the reader better understand certain things or characters
Iβm about 120 chapters in and my experience so far is not bad but not great. Itβa basically a cheap rip off of solo leveling. It has its own story with some differences in the world. The mc personality is annoying which makes it hard for me to really continue. I probably will though since the book is fairly short with only 500 chapters If you liked solo leveling you will probably like this book
Beginning started out cliche. Flowed quite nicely and is an okay read. Kinda liked it but there were some convenient things that happened. His sister happened to be skilled too after getting better. Werenβt there others that would have fit the bill. If so, why didnβt it become known.
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Loved the book, loved the storyline, plot twists, characters. Gonna follow author's other books. After finishing a good book you somehow feel a little empty, like there's something missing, had these feeling after a long time. Because in these busy days if a story doesn't hook you enough, you end up dropping. This book I read and finished because it got me addicted. Gonna miss these characters, can't wait for the 2.0 version. Cheers π
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i love this book so much ive followed along since before there were 100 chapters total. ive even restarted just to refeel the rush this has given me chills only anime has been capable of thank you so.much for writing this
who says you cannot rise? This book shows that the MC who comes from nothing and has to steal to get something, can overcome the prejudices put on him by others while growing to who knows how high. Good Read and recommended.
i love this book. i took a break for 6months or so but man i jumped back in and was blown away..... this book is amazing enough that i would gladly start over from the beginning. please please if this ever gets completed and turned into a physical copy let me know and i will be your first buyer
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
good book, wish they released chapters Daily though. I don't know what else to put, I guess it won't let you post until the review is long enough. 145 characters is the minimum.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Update! Thanks to your good wishes, I finally got rid of Covid. Also, thank you for 4 million views. It's the happiest I have been in a while. And I'm back at uploading regular chapters so there's that too. Thank you for bearing with me the support you gave me was overwhelming. I can't believe how many kind wishes I got in that tough time.
THIS STORY ALL OF THIS STORY one of the most fxcking brilliant stories I have read so far in my life. I fxcking love this story π€©ππ€© dear author, I'm emotionally unstable to but all the best people are, especially when they are self aware of being emotionally unstable. π
this story is a wonderful rollercoaster of emotions, perfectly written, brilliantly thought out. This novel has no wasted detail, overdrawn out arch or scene, everything is is well blended and every detail world together to make the whole story even better, in some ways the story even beats solo leveling and supreme magus. I'm read up to the latest and all I can say is, if you're just starting this novel or you're about to start , you're in for a treat, because this story will keep you wanting more from beginning to end. Amazing work author!! I hope this gets an anime or at least character designs in form of nfts in the nearest future.
i read somewhere that this resembles solo leveling so I got interested but why of narration and cringe dialogues made my head ache...i read till 100 chapters and now dropped ..
Read this within hours.π Captures several lores with stunning accuracy It's a cocktail of gods, dragons and demons. Yummy!!!!!!!π
Reveal Spoiler ΰΉΰΈΰΉΰΉΰΈΰΉΰΈΰΈ΄ΰΈΰΈΰΈΰΈ²ΰΈΰΈ²ΰΈ£ΰΈΰΈ’ΰΉΰΈ²ΰΈΰΈ’ΰΈ΄ΰΉΰΈ ΰΈ‘ΰΈ΅ΰΈΰΈ§ΰΈ²ΰΈ‘ΰΈΰΈ²ΰΈΰΈΰΈ₯ΰΈ²ΰΈΰΉΰΈΰΈΰΈ²ΰΈ£ΰΈΰΉΰΈΰΈͺΰΈΉΰΉΰΈΰΈ±ΰΈΰΈ¨ΰΈ±ΰΈΰΈ£ΰΈΉΰΈ ΰΈ²ΰΈΰΈͺΰΈ§ΰΈ’ΰΈΰΉΰΈ§ΰΈ’ΰΈΰΈ£ΰΈ±ΰΈ
This story was honestly the best Iβve read on this app. The world design and characters are all fleshed out very well in my opinion. The only issue i had was the occasional misspelling or incorrect name. I give it a 10/10 for you readers out there. Remember, Arnold is beyond a madlad
Tip: Never assume your reader knows what your talking about, unless your talking about something that is common knowledge. Like in the synopsis you randomly brought in "paladins" can be confusing for some readers. Don't gotta use my advice, but I recommend you do. Good book π
So I thought the concept would be interesting but its immediately ruined by a cliche system. Writing quality is poor but somewhat understandable. Maybe English is not authorβs first language and/or little time is spent editing. A few word choices suggest the influence of English from India. (Just a neutal observation. Could be wrong and does not matter for the rating) But thatβs not the point. The writing goes through cliche plot points with insufficient description as quickly as possible. This leaves readers with the impression things are illogical. Chapters are very short. Also, asking readers to vote on what happens in the story so early on is simply a recipe for a disordered plot. I read a couple dozen chapters hoping it could improve but I have to give up. I wouldnβt normaly rate it but the reviews have clearly been manipulated by someone spamming 5 stars.
This book was an AMAZING read. I canβt wait for the next one!! I for sure recommend you to read. The characters, the scenes were all written absolutely wonderfully
Plot is similar to solo leveling but different at the same time mc has a sick sister instead has a system and he is a porter instead of an adventurer so he has a worst background
I love how ther is the incorporation of multiple mythologies and how in early chapters you used definitions and backstories to help the reader better understand certain things or characters
Iβm about 120 chapters in and my experience so far is not bad but not great. Itβa basically a cheap rip off of solo leveling. It has its own story with some differences in the world. The mc personality is annoying which makes it hard for me to really continue. I probably will though since the book is fairly short with only 500 chapters If you liked solo leveling you will probably like this book
Beginning started out cliche. Flowed quite nicely and is an okay read. Kinda liked it but there were some convenient things that happened. His sister happened to be skilled too after getting better. Werenβt there others that would have fit the bill. If so, why didnβt it become known.
I loved the novel with the ending β€οΈπβ€οΈπβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Loved the book, loved the storyline, plot twists, characters. Gonna follow author's other books. After finishing a good book you somehow feel a little empty, like there's something missing, had these feeling after a long time. Because in these busy days if a story doesn't hook you enough, you end up dropping. This book I read and finished because it got me addicted. Gonna miss these characters, can't wait for the 2.0 version. Cheers π
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i love this book so much ive followed along since before there were 100 chapters total. ive even restarted just to refeel the rush this has given me chills only anime has been capable of thank you so.much for writing this
who says you cannot rise? This book shows that the MC who comes from nothing and has to steal to get something, can overcome the prejudices put on him by others while growing to who knows how high. Good Read and recommended.
i love this book. i took a break for 6months or so but man i jumped back in and was blown away..... this book is amazing enough that i would gladly start over from the beginning. please please if this ever gets completed and turned into a physical copy let me know and i will be your first buyer
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
good book, wish they released chapters Daily though. I don't know what else to put, I guess it won't let you post until the review is long enough. 145 characters is the minimum.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Update! Thanks to your good wishes, I finally got rid of Covid. Also, thank you for 4 million views. It's the happiest I have been in a while. And I'm back at uploading regular chapters so there's that too. Thank you for bearing with me the support you gave me was overwhelming. I can't believe how many kind wishes I got in that tough time.