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Before Tabitha awoke in the forest, she never thought she would have to say goodbye to her past.
Twisted world and uncanny missions.
Monsters, ghosts, and even demons, things that she only saw in movies appeared one by one.
In order to survive, Tabitha accepted this nightmarish reality. She was on the verge of life and death. She seemed to have lost herself. All of them thought they would never get out until she found the key of the way to leave this world in the mission!
Could she escape from this horrible world? And what was the meaning of this world’s existence?
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Hi all, this is Louisa-FS. I'm the new writer to the web, hope you guys will like my story.
I will update 4 chapters per week(double chapters during the holidays).
If you like my book or have any thoughts about it, please leave your comments below, I would really appreciate.
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My girlfriend very love this story. She sincerely recomdate this novel to me and I believe her choice. At beginning the story, I feel very board because it perhaps to be a old-finishing horror story. However, with the plot turn in to a tremendously confliction. I begin to enjoy reading it. Anyway, I will highly suggest this novel to everyone who has sufficient imaginations and different tast.
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I read the first chapter it look interesting and i kinda liked it i only hope it to developed more amazing plots and most of all a stable updates.... temporary 5/5 wish we will never reach to the time that i edit it... Also lets change the topic to the cover. That cover/picture looks real to me. it that you author?
Too funny to read! It’s what I really enjoy rather than some masterworks. The settings are funny and the plot catches me very tight. I can’t wait to read the next Chapter!
Pretty cliched. Dialogue is a bit juvenile ("You noticed the monster's eyes had problems and that was very smart") and they aren't phrased in a way that normal people would say things - if you read it aloud it just doesn't sound right. The worldbuilding is lacking; could do with more descriptions about the world the MC sees and how she reacts to it. Some constructive criticism: Descriptions of clothing are unnecessary (don't need to know that her coat is made of denim or that her tights are black) and a bit of a red flag for bad writing. After introducing Tabitha, there is no need to keep using her name at the beginning of each sentence. There are multiple instances where you use words that you obviously don't know (cesspool, meganthropus, prodigious) because they're not used correctly or in a way that doesn't fit the story. Rather than using large words, its better and more powerful to describe it in ******r terms -- this doesn't necessarily have to be a literal description, it could also be in the reactions of characters to it.
I kinda couldn\t feel much about the character after reading the first few chapters and I kinda expected that much but the thing I'm really missing is the world building cause from the beginning all we know is that their in a forest and that's about it all we get is the name of the world and that's all
The grammatical mistakes are really annoying, such as "After she entering... ". They can make the story almost incomprehensible at times. And the writing quality also needs improvement. Several sentences just don't sound natural, and the placement of objects and people can be confusing at times. I was hoping this book could replace Thriller Paradise, but unfortunately it ended up following it instead.
Give me more. I like this story a lot. The only reason I didn't make a review before now is that I like to completely read one volume of a series before I review it. This story is very good so I am breaking my rule to ask for more chapters. Please don't let your work go to waste and update more.
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So far so good.. its just maybe the world building a litle bit lack.. But i hope its gnna be btter and btter after all its just a start :) Keep your hard work Writer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A great story so far. ....................................................................................................................................
So far so good.. its just maybe the world building a litle bit lack.. But i hope its gnna be btter and btter after all its just a start :) Keep your hard work Writer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The story is good, maybe got a little lack of the world building, but it's just a start. We will see how the story would develop next, I will just put it into my library now
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I like this story and its originality. the author has fantastic imagination and creativity. Tabitha in this novel is well developed and anyone can follow her around to see her fear when she first arrive, her personality, how she start to grow and adapt to her new world and how she interact with the other characters.
I'm not really sure what's really happening on this story. It's really vague but I'm giving it a shot. I think some chapter is missing cause I really don't know what happen on Tabitha's first mission.
Writing Quality 4/5 The writing is suspenseful, leaving a lot of room for imagination. Each chapter has a lingering hook that entices me to continue reading. Very excellent for a rookie author. The story will be even better with a dedicated editor. Story Development 5/5 The story is tightly written and within the first two chapters, we get the general idea of how the story will proceed. This episodic arc style also leaves a lot of room for development, making it easier for a rookie writer to write. Character design 5/5 The characters' are quickly developed in a few chapters to understand their basic personalities. We also see hints of romance and jealousy in just a few sentences. Very skillfully written. World Background 5/5 The world is developed reasonably. The various episodic worlds and their mysteries are intriguing and I hope they slowly develop into a huge overarching plot.