/ Fantasy / The Runes Of The Phythix
Synopsis
Sam was a baker in Los Angeles. After being fired on a rough day, she tried desperately to find a new job. After countless days of being rejected, she got a new job in a restaurant called “Jalaminõs”. To celebrate this accomplishment she and her 11 friends decided to go on a vacation in a resort. They all had fun and talked to each other until sunset. But once the night came and the stars started to twinkle, some of them decided to search underneath the sands for treasures. They searched for a while but one of them soon found a mysterious box. They are baffled at first but finally decided to open it. But what they didn't know was that this would be the beginning of a whole new adventure.
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The new synopsis looks much better! There are still some errors in the text, but who doesn't make them ;) Interesting storyline and characters. You're doing a good job! Happy New Year!
When I saw the title, I was stunned. It was almost the same as my name "Typhlix" it even had the same letters but in different orders. Lol Anyways, the novel is overall okay but it needs more paragraphs. The paragraph would make it easier to read. [img=recommend]
First English is not my first language so I'm sorry if I can't check your grammar HAHAHA. And I must say I love the way you deliver your characters and the way you describe the settings is very clear and wonderful. Keep up the good work. If you all got time please do check out this awesome fantasy book with your friends and best friends or just you all won't regret it.
Writing Quality- Nothing is wrong with the authors grammar or spelling its just how the converstations are coming along that sort of irk me. My suggestion is to look at how other stories format their dialogue cuz that can be a deal breaker, but overall good writing quality. Stability of Updates- WIth the few chapters released at the moment i would say the author is dedicated to their story and enjoys writing so the updates are good. Story Development- Its progressing at a level where im happy but could be slowed down if the author wants to. Character Design- Id say the author already got their characters all planned out, so i have nothing really to complain abt in this department. World Background- Though the chapters are few the author can sort of introduce to the worlds lore slowly in snippets so that the readers can piece it together as the story goes on and not an info dump which can be forgotten really easilly. Overall-7/10 u made a fan of ur novel and im continue reading it so I can see how ur journey of being an author comes along.