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The Skill Extractor in OnePiece
3.49 (11 ratings)
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Note the main cover isn't mine.
If the person who reads this fanfic thinks starting is ridiculous or at least the starting is worst well I can't do anything about it.
NOTE: Read at least till chapter 8 and NO, MC has his journey.
If my grammar is bad then please I am sorry I can't live up to your expectations, I am writing this for fun and to improve my writing skills not to hear your negative reviews. ( I will take your honest reviews about my grammar and if you want to talk about the story plot and character development then please just go and reach the abyss by digging with a toothpick )
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[Plot lvl. 1/10] [Grammer lvl. 2/10] [Story Development lvl. 3/10] Overall - [Story lvl. 2/10] Not recommended for new readers. .... ... .. .
SPOILERS: Things that made me turn away from this 1. The explanation where the MC body is what would come about when madara, hashirama and a rando uzumaki F*cked and had a child. 2. Chakra in One piece 3. Cringe "Mc name is one" 4. Another one of those Mc who is a straw-hat/luffy's dog 5. Grammarly being free but still unused.
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not realy 5☆ but i will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - so far so good, not joining luffy is a good decision, tnx for not nurfing the mc. 5☆ for no harem bs. for now no romance well done. (no more pokemon master mc's) ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - a good mix of characters. Uchiha Madara, Hashirama and Reinhard. Great. but why are not using hashirama's ability? (regeneration and wood element). or are you planning to use it in the future hmmm. ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆ - One Piece
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Bad for: 14 wishes. ???? Story canon. MC secondary character. MC very stupid Grammar 2/1 ,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/
Sorry but stories where you get wishes is a bit stupid... But keep writing, who knows, perhaps it will get better Good luck blablablblablalball
bro so far so good, at first I thought it would look like another novel that has a naruto system in the onepiece, but it doesn’t show much of the naruto world, but it’s not so focused, it’s well divided between shinobe techniques, the art of the sword and everything else, I thought it was also nice that he didn’t join the straw hats because if he joined there wouldn’t be any logic since he is much stronger than any 1 of the pack he should be almost at the level of admiral, the grammar is a little confusing sometimes but nothing too serious (if you can put the level of potecina he represents as a novice vici-admiral, senior vici-admiral, or captain yonko, it would be cool, and continue with the story because it is a very of the best so far of one piece with things from other worlds)
Qualidade de escrita............... ☆☆☆☆☆ - não realmente 5 ☆, mas darei 5 ☆ ▪︎Desenvolvimento da história........ ☆☆☆☆☆ - até aí tudo bem, não entrar no luffy é uma boa decisão, tnx para não nurfing o mc. 5 ☆ sem harém bs. Por enquanto nenhum romance bem feito. ( chega de mc do mestre pokemon) ▪︎Design de personagens........... ☆☆☆☆☆ - uma boa mistura de personagens. Uchiha Madara, Hashirama e Reinhard. Excelente. Mas, porque não está usando a habilidade de hashirama? (regeneração e elemento madeira). Ou você está planejando usá-lo no futuro, hmmm. ▪︎Atualizando a estabilidade.......... ☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Plano de fundo......... ☆☆☆☆☆
Penulisan cukup bagus namun kurang nya dalam percakapanya ...... .. .. ....... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawaaaa .mc kurang kuat tambahin om .....
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grammar needs work,too many mistakes , its readable though. story: i lost interst when he got 14 wishes, does "story development" still matter at this point, if he cant become a god in 1 month with 14 wishes than this story is bad for a different reason. character: have not read far enough for that, but the impression of the mc is "meh" fine i guess. world: "meh" but apparently he doesn't join luffy which gives me hope that he actually explores it in a different way than luffy. and since detailed knowledge of op is gone he wont join either. overall impression of this story 3/10 5/10 would be an average story, decent in grammar and story development, likeable mc ect. this story isn't quite there yet.