You writing needs work, seems like to me that you are writing this on your phone so before you post the charpter review him and fix the mistakes, and just one more thing, don't make some useless history like how he was reborn a bunch of times, that's useless
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the novel is better than those new fanfic novel the only problem about is first you didnt list what kind of looks he has and second there are some words that needs to be corrected
You writing needs work, seems like to me that you are writing this on your phone so before you post the charpter review him and fix the mistakes, and just one more thing, don't make some useless history like how he was reborn a bunch of times, that's useless ...................................................................................
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