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Mike was an average white collar office worker for a large corporation. He was not happy with his job, but not depressed enough he would kill himselfor others. so one day when he is suddenly hit by a speeding street sweeper on his way to work, it seems like his end, but he is transported away as a soul minutes before his death on earth. now he has to restart his life in a world full of magic as an overpowered child. He has to keep his powers under wraps to not make anyone suspicious. Will he be able to keep his powers under wraps? Or will his powers prove to be to powerful to contain.
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So far I like it. I recommend it to fans of the system and another world. the only downside is the pace is too fast at least at this point. I'm in Chapter 8.
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writing quality needs some improvement some scenes and paragraphs dont flow smoothly with the abrupt scene changes, story development is too fast character design really needs some work so far, characters dont feel like people and are only there for the sake of it or just to move the plot, world building is so far okay with the language. the problem with system novels is the authors make their combat or even the usefulness of skills identical to a game even though the setting of their story is the real world(obviously not our real world but the world where mc lives) and not in a game world, in most system novels you use the skill fireball and a preset fireball appears unable to be adjusted by the user making it so that the user doesn't have full grasp of his skills, but in magic novels you use the skill fireball the user can freely manipulate the fireball in any way user sees fit which is obviously a lot better because he can use a any kind of power of the fireball for the situation user is in. the MC doesn't even explore his skills or use it to the fullest, for example perfect energy control when you hear "perfect energy control" you imagine the mc freely manipulating energy fluidly making it do things how he sees fit, but instead the mc asks the system to adjust it for him to basic level