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Feels and sounds like a wuxia novel and that is absolutely wrong for the Naruto World. And using English translation of Kekkei Genkai just seems wrong.
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It's not a bad idea, you should get a editor......................................................... ........................................................................................
As an author, of course, I'll put a solid 5 !!! This is a translation, not an original work. Fanfic Chinese.
Decent story, but seriously shitty writing, it's written like chinese cultivation novels with mc going from weak bullied orphan to getting a power for 1 day and becoming the bully instead and is just plain arrogant over a tiny level and 1 spell...
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Feels and sounds like a wuxia novel and that is absolutely wrong for the Naruto World. And using English translation of Kekkei Genkai just seems wrong.
😍🤩😘😍🤩🤩😍😗😗😍🤩🤩😗😍☺😘😘😍😗😍☺😍😗😂☺😂😊😂☺shhdososjshdjdjdjsoeiwhwheidjsjwheiejejidkejeheiddkkdjdndhdudjhdudiejejehdhdudueuieiwieuehdhdhrheieooowi
HMMMMMMMMMMMM.............................................. ...INTERESTINGG.....................DONT DISSAPOINTED ME........... ......................
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Reveal Spoiler It's not a bad idea, you should get a editor......................................................... ........................................................................................
As an author, of course, I'll put a solid 5 !!! This is a translation, not an original work. Fanfic Chinese.
Decent story, but seriously shitty writing, it's written like chinese cultivation novels with mc going from weak bullied orphan to getting a power for 1 day and becoming the bully instead and is just plain arrogant over a tiny level and 1 spell...
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