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thisisjustatest: This is the worst novel i have read so far in webnovel, if it was possible to give a 0 for the score, i would have done it.
The first 10 chapters are good but it's just a trap...

Once Human, Now a Parasite
1 month ago

BookDevourer87: The first chapters got rewritten to make it seem like the author is capable of proper English... But just a few chapters later it becomes unbearable! His English is so bad that it gets really hard to understand some sentences and the rest are full of errors. This makes it incredibly hard to enjoy reading this novel. Character development is inconsistent and overall I am not a fan of this novel. If the authors English would at least make it pleasent to read I would give it more than just 50 chapters to captivate me... But like this, I am dropping this sh*tty novel.

Once Human, Now a Parasite
1 month ago

Mustanges: The level of hypocrisy is way too high in this novel....

"The only way he would lose all rationality and start a massacre is if someone dared to hurt Lucy, at that time, none would can wish to escape from his grasp as he will mercilessly kill them all"

The academy tried to kill not only him BUT ALSO HIS WIFE, LUCY! WHERE IS THE ANGER? Where is the towering killing intent?Not only is he not fucking angry after almost being killed and his wife almost killed but his personality improved??

Mary said "sorry" and he just let her fucking go? What? Someone was a part of the group that had the intention of killing him and Lucy but she is let off because she said sorry.... the stupidity is next level for real. Not only that but Mary even had the audacity to make requests when her life wasn't taken... (not to kill the headmistress).

He also went and apologised to the royal family of humanity, but they were the ones to provoke him, not once nor twice but several times but in exchange for that he not only didn't kill a single person but also apologised and gave out weapons and tips to the royal family.... is this even life?

Someone spits in your face and you give them an amazing gaming computer???

Once Human, Now a Parasite
1 month ago

DawnSky: Not worth reading. The MC is the most inconsistent, and quite literally retarded MC that I have seen in a long time.
Nothing he says or does fits in with his backstory or supposed mindset, and even then it wildly changes every few paragraphs .
It's also incredibly frustrating how retarded he is. He gets the ability to possess any living or dead being and fully, permanently, gain their stats and skills. So what does he do with that? Nothing. Instead of bouncing between anything he possibly can to gain the maximum possible benefit of his ability he does nothing with it at all.

Once Human, Now a Parasite
1 month ago

Rico321: what if you put mutated animals instead of zombified animals as if the virus transforms them into different life forms but not transmitting the virus just makes them aggressive and stronger

The Walking Dead's Gamer · C0
1 month ago

Asmodai216: Writing Quality: Trash tier. The grammar is awful, you can tell the writer isn't a native English speaker. It's legible, you can understand it, but a 5 minute spelling and grammar check on each chapter isn't too much to ask for.

Stability of Updates: The author Seion writes a bunch of different system based stories and updates all of them with great frequency. This is great as far as updating the story goes, but it seriously detracts from the quality of the story. An author churning out multiple updates a day for different stories will end up suffering when it comes to quality and foresight.

Story Development: Like a lot of the sub-standard wish fulfillment series on this site, the pacing of the story is very quick. Characters who should gradually build up a relationship with others are instead instantly won over for no real reason, and a bunch of plot points are not thought out well... Whatsoever... At all.

Character Design: The MC we're given is freaking ridiculous. I personally appreciate an MC I can relate to, but I usually like an MC that has a fleshed out character. This MC fails to react with anything resembling common sense, decency, caution, or any other reasonable character trait. For fucks sake, in chapter 8 he literally molests a goddess and goes on to say that he likes things to be consensual.

Speaking of, the characters from the series are massively OOC with no real explanation given. Sure, some basic traits are there, but they are railroaded onto whatever path the author wants with no explanation other than, "Hurr durr, Hestia is cute, I don't care if she's a virgin goddess who only fell for the pure-hearted Bell after he spent months earnestly supporting her, I want her to get with my supah awesome MC." I don't even care if he stole her from Bell, just make it actually make some damn sense.

Then there are the background characters who just go along with this complete bull****.

World Background: The only reason this is getting 2 stars is because of the ALREADY FUNCTIONING world provided by virtue of being FANFICTION. Frankly, the additions made regarding the system, the MCs abilities, and his self-insert into an adventurer's body make no goddamn sense whatsoever.

"Hey Eina, I'm already level 3 despite not being in a familia. It doesn't matter that even having a level at all requires someone to have a falna, I'm supah aweshome and you'll totally believe me"

"I've never been apart of a familia, even though the body I took over was actually apart of one before I got here."

Summary: This is a pretty standard work for the author, Seion. Crappy grammar, characters and powers that don't make any damn sense. Railroading into relationships that don't make any damn sense from the chicks standpoint. Generic crappy wish-fulfillment fanfic is trash.

Dungeon System Within DanMachi
1 month ago
Reading Status: C1
Let me just tell everyone about my powers. What could possibly go wrong? Loving parents stop caring about their child because he gets amnesia? Bullsh**! View More
Batman Reborn
1 month ago

StellarJade: Fun story, grammar isn't great by any means, but it's readable for the majority of it. Not a great story but it's just fun to read and imagine the mc doing crazy things. KEEP IT UP!!!

Game Of Thrones - Gacha Version
1 month ago
Reading Status: C3
Fun story, grammar isn't great by any means, but it's readable for the majority of it. Not a great story but it's just fun to read and imagine the mc doing crazy things. KEEP IT UP!!! View More
Game Of Thrones - Gacha Version
1 month ago
Reading Status: C4
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Recarnation of ultimate Spider man
1 month ago
Reading Status: C0
Would rather just watch the show considering there is no difference.



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INTO THE FLASH.
1 month ago
Reading Status: C4
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Recarnation of ultimate Spider man
1 month ago
Reading Status: C4
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Monkey Pirate King
1 month ago
Reading Status: C51
Can't do it, it's just one of those things that bothers me too much. Story is great but this is a deal breaker for me, sorry.
He, She, Him, Her -- How do you get these mixed up so much??? View More
My new life in One Piece
1 month ago

F1nal: Pikachu

Conquering the world with One Piece · C38
1 month ago

BigToFu: How can someone hate when its clearly stolen work.

Recarnation of ultimate Spider man
1 month ago
Reading Status: C4
Stole from FanFiction . net
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Recarnation of ultimate Spider man
1 month ago

StellarJade: Useless mc = pointless story
If the mc isn't going to actually do anything, then why are you continuing the story. You're pretty much following canon, just adding a character and nothing else. Iris would have still been able to beat the snake without the mc, so what purpose does he serve?

Harry Potter: Rise of The Spiral · C8
2 months ago

StellarJade: What... The... Fuck? Are you the director for "Emoji the movie"?

I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C126
2 months ago

StellarJade: If you feel uncomfortable writing this, then drop it. But in my opinion it's fun to read and not take it too seriously. People need to get that stick out of their as*. You are writing this novel, not them. Don't pay too much attention to what people say, just do what you feel like doing.

Absolute Stealing · C30
2 months ago
If you feel uncomfortable writing this, then drop it. But in my opinion it's fun to read and not take it too seriously. People need to get that stick out of their as*. You are writing this novel, not them. Don't pay too much attention to what people say, just do what you feel like doing. View More
Absolute Stealing · C30
2 months ago
Reading Status: C0
Author gave himself three 5-star reviews so this is the first of three 1-star reviews.

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Reincarnated Godzilla In Remnant
2 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
I Found A Planet · C1
2 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring View More
I Found A Planet · C1
2 months ago

Greedward: Can't read anymore. It has nothing to do with the actual story. I get it... it is a fan-fiction and things are different, but this really has nothing to do with Naruto. Everything is happy, they got a house, they got friends with ease. The mc has trash looks... I mean blue and red hair, come on! They learnt the clone jutsu already and idk how. No interaction with other characters and much more bad stufd that meakes you not wanting to read.

Nothing to see here.
2 months ago

StellarJade: The reason they didn't recieve their inheritance was that 3rd thought that it would bring the 4ths enemies to them. The shadow clone jutsu was a Forbidden jutsu, that you could only learn with the hokage's approval and even then mostly only jonin. Naruto learned the shadow clone jutsu when he stole the scroll the night of graduation. You saying "he just learned it" makes no sense. And C-Rank missions are not typically missions where you are to encounter any enemy ninja and might encounter bandits at the most. So when MC gets excited about fighting enemy ninja on a C-Rank mission, it doesn't make sense.

Nothing to see here.
2 months ago
The reason they didn't recieve their inheritance was that 3rd thought that it would bring the 4ths enemies to them. The shadow clone jutsu was a Forbidden jutsu, that you could only learn with the hokage's approval and even then mostly only jonin. Naruto learned the shadow clone jutsu when he stole the scroll the night of graduation. You saying "he just learned it" makes no sense. And C-Rank missions are not typically missions where you are to encounter any enemy ninja and might encounter bandits at the most. So when MC gets excited about fighting enemy ninja on a C-Rank mission, it doesn't make sense. View More

_SupremeBeing_: I thank you for your review! The description of his hair is red with strands of blue, they still don't have friends as although they received their inheritance, their status as the village demon didn't changed, so, they are still hated by the villagers, just that you didn't read the novel properly and made a half wrong review. It was said on the chapters that he trained himself and Naruto to control their chakra properly, as it was a mess due the Kyuubi, being easy to learn clone jutsu. His existence changed the NarutoVerse, creating a new dimension, said on the chapter 12, said this, thank for the review again.

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2 months ago
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2 months ago
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Naruto In Marvel Universe
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WINTER COMES(Game of Thrones)
2 months ago
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