The woods of the dead

LV 6

anon88

This is a review of the first chapter. Due to the shortness of the chapter, there seems to be a big plot hole. The young girl (lead character) heard a noise last night and wants to sneak-out of her home the next morning to investigate. The author doesn’t explain why only the girl and not her mother was able to hear the sounds last night. There are a few grammar issues with run on sentences and paragraph breaks. More chapters are need for a full evaluation, but the author possesses a strong imagination.