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As always, I read the synopsis before reading the novel, and it didn't fail to disappoint me. It's still has room for improvements, but it got the hook I was looking for. It would also be good if I read about the world you're building, so I will think that this novel is action packed. I was also not quite fond of the first chapter because I thought it would come out strong like a battle scene before transitioning to other scenes to pique the interest of the readere more. Although I enjoyed reading it, it felt a little bit bland. Overall, the plot became interesting the more I read. Good work author! The way the scenes were also described is superb, so I look forward to the development of this novel [img=strong]
The narration is captivating, words choices are good and not so hard to understand for a non-english native speaker, and its very descriptive. The formality of the writing makes it a good read and plot is interesting. Though I'd suggest to break long paragraphs into two coz sometimes it bores the readers and they ended up skipping it. Some readers are like that😊. It's a good read!👏
I do love the descriptive writing and it makes for an interesting experience. The dialogue is pretty smooth, and the the author is good at setting a mood in just a short time. Only complaint is sometimes it feels like the author is rambling and has some filler trying to make up chapters but its pretty good and has plenty of action .
This book is just my cup of tea. I love the story building, the world building and the writing quality the Author San has provided in this work. Please continue to do so 🌚👌🏽
Glad to be the first person giving the review. Nice writing, good background and the characters aren’t in details. Am not over hyping you though, just that the novel is great..
To those who love advanced worldbuilding, cross-country adventures, and multiple races and clans, this is the story for you. Be warned, however, as This story does get pretty dark at times, with extremely gruesome and horrific deaths, in surprising and unique ways. Ultimately, I hope to provide something for everyone, especially if you like fantasy.