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Starting off on here and being able to reach so many readers was a dream come true. After over 11 months of hard work, I finally released the 3 titles I wrote on Amazon and became a self published author.
If any of you want to support, you can see all three titles below. If not, I completely understand.
Thank you for the wonderful year of supporting this dream of mine! -dff123
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07XCSMTR9
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07XWDYBMX
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07XNCNHPB
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good story and like how the author is taking it slow i would recommend this story but hope that the author continues writing guess the main character has some cool skills but it turns out they are basic compared to everyone in the universe
Compared to other web novels of original work on here, this one caught my attention. The punctuation (which as a reader matters a lot to me) was there and you even had the storytelling which was not bad at all! Story seems rather slow, but I think the author's intention was to make a long journey type of story and I want to read more already.
I really like the story, a slow pace, but I feel it is more important with a slow and a stable pace, then anything else. I hope this story will become something good and I will gladly continue reading this story as there will be more chapters. Keep up the good work!!
Great work keep it up! I enjoyed the story build up and am interested to see how you progress. I like the background you have to better give me an idea of what is taking place presently. The dialogue is great too between characters.
Gave this a chance because I saw so many high ratings and the author on discord seemed very sincere and nice. I hope that this author keeps up the good work because the story may be slow but for story development I think it works fairly well. Good luck @dff123
I think this story has a lot of potential. The concept is intriguing. So why not 5 star all the way? Well, the writing flows but it needs a push more for the full 5 star. As for the world building, there are some inconsistencies that need smoothing out. It could use some more depth the first 5 chapters to firm up that foundation. :)
the fact that you left a cliffhanger in the prologue pissed me off as a reader and what made this a thousand times worse is that you are moving slowly with the story what in the actual hell? will admit though i am digging the story and you should keep writing before someone smacks you for all of these cliffhangers bwahahaha
I am not one who usually leaves reviews, but this time I seriously had to. This author's storytelling is TOP NOTCH! No seriously, I would highly recommend this read and seriously @dff123 do NOT leave us hanging on this one. Keep writing because I need my itch man!!!
I've known @dff123 for a while now, he actually introduced me to novels recently after we shared our love for anime. Though this may seem a little biased, he has always written short stories about anything and everything and I have always enjoyed reading anything he felt needed to be given criticism. After becoming familiar with the genre, I feel that this author really understands every aspect that goes into writing a story such as this one and would recommend it to everyone.
so proud of youuuuu!!!!!! <3 i remember the first time @dff123 came into WW's chatroom and told everyone how he wants to be a writer glad you followed through!!!! love your work that i am sure you already knew but yay!!!
i do not know whats worse that the author has a cliffhanger at the beginning of this or that he is asking for positive feedback so he could continue writing why you have to do this???????????????????? oh well the story is good so far and deserves the 5 stars score
So far so good I want the author to keep up this story though. The overall plot was introduced RIGHT AWAY? Like what? Come on @dff123 you should keep going because you have me curious about this book now. >.<
seems like it starts off a little slow but the storytelling is definitely there i would recommend the read and i hope the author releases more chapters
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Pretty good so far. But the 10+ five star reviews from new accounts is really suspicious. Still an interesting novel nevertheless.
This was the very first novel I chose to work on. After becoming more familiar with other novels in the genre, my writing has improved drastically over the past several years. I would love feedback, and if there is enough positive feedback, I will continue releasing more chapters. Looking forward to taking this journey with all of my future readers!