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"The God's play favorites, unfortunately I was the devil's child."
Afflicted with a mysterious death curse that decided his life to merely last 25 years, Lucas Aillard, the Duke of Aillard house, ever since he was a child was already conscious of his own final moments.
Cursed by destiny, shunned by fate and forced into a losing game, the child him had decided to take his destiny at his own hands.
In the mere age of 18, he had already crossed the entire world, acquired boundless knowledge and controlled a kingdom on the palm of his hands.
But even with an unbending will and overwhelming potential, he still wasn't able to prevent the inevitable.
He failed in the end.
At his 25th year of living, Lucas Aillard had died from mysterious circumstances.
But in some time later, Lucas woke up... this time in a different place. A place of chaos, horror and new beginnings; in where soulcraft, magical beings and nightmare beasts exist.
Using all his experience and wits from his previous life, he would once again seek for the goal he had always wanted to achieve — complete freedom.
However... it wouldn't be so simple.
Underneath everything was a scheme that stretches beyond time itself, started from an unknowable history and taking fruit in the present, he was a wildcard thrown in the chaotic board.
The Warlock.
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Updates are shaky, but the quality should be no problem. The MC does evil things like genocide, betrayal, but not rape. Still a piece of shit though.
No romance, no harem. I'm not good at writing that stuff.
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The novels professor is way better than this.... rip, I miss it. The novels professor was actually a good novel... Guess it won't be coming back rip 😭 😢
Three chapters in and thank you for giving me the opportunity to review your novel. Please keep in mind that this review is purely my personal opinion and is meant to be constructive criticism to help you improve your writing. First, the concept of your novel is interesting and unique. The idea of a character being transmigrated into another world and discovering their powers and abilities is something that many readers enjoy. However, the execution of this concept in the three chapters that I read was somewhat lacking. One of the main issues I noticed was the pacing of the story. The first chapter started off with a lot of action and tension, but then slowed down significantly in the second and third chapters. This made it difficult for me to stay engaged and invested in the story. It would be helpful to maintain a consistent level of tension and excitement throughout the novel to keep readers interested. Another issue I noticed was the lack of world-building. While the Oversoul System and the concept of soul ranks and purity are interesting, there is very little information given about the world that Lucas has been transmigrated to. This makes it difficult for the reader to fully immerse themselves in the story and understand the context in which the events are taking place. It would be helpful to give more information about the world and its rules, cultures, and history to help the reader understand and become invested in the story. Lastly, the characters in your novel felt somewhat flat and one-dimensional. While Lucas has a clear motivation and goal, the other characters that he interacts with do not have much depth or development. It would be helpful to give these characters more depth and complexity to make them more relatable and interesting to the reader. Overall, while the concept of your novel is interesting, the execution in the three chapters that I read could use some improvement. I recommend focusing on pacing, world-building, and character development to enhance the reader's experience and keep them engaged in the story. I hope this review was helpful and I wish you the best of luck in your writing endeavors.
Read the First Chapter. I can't say whether it's going to be good or not but I can say one thing for sure that it's extremely long lol Like the readers might fall asleep due to the unnecessary lines. Well, it's just based on chapter 1. In any case, it seems to have some inspirations which I can clearly see. As such, I think that it's going to be a Good one for sure. Now, people who are reading my Review. The Review was asked but what I have written is truth. Now, you people might as well check my Novel Tea Sipping Young Master out[img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed]