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Man, i really dont like your novel.... Just dont give a shit about a damn plot.... MC present already altered the plot.... This is why i dont like some fanfiction novel.... Because some author who's doesn't want to change the plot Just for the sake of having more chapter and always give some shitty excuse about the consequance if MC Change the plot..... Huh, meh.... Just another brainless author....
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Complete wish fulfilment. English is fine, it's readable but with errors, text lingo, etc. Power system and wishes are whack, but those don't matter at all since the MC is broken, and the story is about fantasy fulfilment. MC is hollow and so are the characters. Reads like a script, rather than a story. Not my type of story, but definitely has a reader base that will be interested. Maybe 13 year olds that want some something to store in their spank bank. TL;DR: Don't think while reading and you might be able to read all of it. Not for those looking for quality but some mindless time-pass material.
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not a bad story but is not updates very often...............................................................................................
Yo my nigg how udoing //Thrash// est une blague à un mec qui est en plus de sa part et qui est en couple depuis un génie qui est devenue une couilles... mais il ne sait que tu préfèrerais que je ne me touche plus en ce qui ne te connaître que tu préfèrerais le monde de toi qui te souviens... tu
Great novel, the only problem is not having the continuation of it until now. I hope I can have more chapters to be able to see how the MC of the story unfolds and its ending with your girls, it will be really fun.
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So far it's really good and I always look for more chapters to come out More!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Read-only till 5th chap and found it boring, bland, too many power-ups from start, only two fairly good things about this are writing quality compared to others and updates. Just by reading two-three chapters I got the idea and then got to see Auxillary chapters there is a harem LIST with like more than 30-40 names, the hell? It's like a shopping list.
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Not very good grammar, a bit complicated to read. The characters look one-dimensional. Especially the girls, they just look retarded, they fall in love with him basically pretty fast and practically instantaneous they are already "loving" him. World and characters with zero development.
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It Is go 10/10 would like you all to read it and go 18+ scenes and keep going author boyo and for anime and manga nice plot and etc. Utah more.
I wasn't even halfway through chapter 1 that I dropped this... World background is good but the rest is just bad, it made me think a kid made this.
Isn't these too big of an harem.........🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😓😓😓😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦
Man, i really dont like your novel.... Just dont give a shit about a damn plot.... MC present already altered the plot.... This is why i dont like some fanfiction novel.... Because some author who's doesn't want to change the plot Just for the sake of having more chapter and always give some shitty excuse about the consequance if MC Change the plot..... Huh, meh.... Just another brainless author....
Dropped? Oyfkhdyodujrskkyfitdkgdkgdyiditdkkgdjdjjtdjdtsutditdijgsjtsjtxxjtdjtdjtdjxktsjtsjtdxjcgckgxifdggxkxkgxkgxkgxgjxigxjxgxjxjccjgxkjtxkgxj
More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please!
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Complete wish fulfilment. English is fine, it's readable but with errors, text lingo, etc. Power system and wishes are whack, but those don't matter at all since the MC is broken, and the story is about fantasy fulfilment. MC is hollow and so are the characters. Reads like a script, rather than a story. Not my type of story, but definitely has a reader base that will be interested. Maybe 13 year olds that want some something to store in their spank bank. TL;DR: Don't think while reading and you might be able to read all of it. Not for those looking for quality but some mindless time-pass material.
Gooooooood Joooooooob.........👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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not a bad story but is not updates very often...............................................................................................
Yo my nigg how udoing //Thrash// est une blague à un mec qui est en plus de sa part et qui est en couple depuis un génie qui est devenue une couilles... mais il ne sait que tu préfèrerais que je ne me touche plus en ce qui ne te connaître que tu préfèrerais le monde de toi qui te souviens... tu
Great novel, the only problem is not having the continuation of it until now. I hope I can have more chapters to be able to see how the MC of the story unfolds and its ending with your girls, it will be really fun.
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So far it's really good and I always look for more chapters to come out More!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Read-only till 5th chap and found it boring, bland, too many power-ups from start, only two fairly good things about this are writing quality compared to others and updates. Just by reading two-three chapters I got the idea and then got to see Auxillary chapters there is a harem LIST with like more than 30-40 names, the hell? It's like a shopping list.
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This is a cool story andddddddd I really wish they would update more frequently superrrrrerr cool storyyyyyy thooooooiiwhfbgbdjajdjjsixicjrbrbdnaixiifnfnfjzkxic. Djd jf did djd dhsg
Not very good grammar, a bit complicated to read. The characters look one-dimensional. Especially the girls, they just look retarded, they fall in love with him basically pretty fast and practically instantaneous they are already "loving" him. World and characters with zero development.
Reveal Spoiler It Is go 10/10 would like you all to read it and go 18+ scenes and keep going author boyo and for anime and manga nice plot and etc. Utah more.
I wasn't even halfway through chapter 1 that I dropped this... World background is good but the rest is just bad, it made me think a kid made this.
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