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The author nerfed the main character immediately. What was the point of giving him the strength of saitama if you were just going to nerf him? You might as well made him wish for something else
MC have female face and body. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Absolute waste of time. So, content, there is none. You get exactly what the synopsis say. There is no interaction at all from the MC with anyone, frankly this looks like more like an eternal description without anything of note. MC did this and then that, he did all those even with how ridiculous it sounds, then a time skip of 11 years because yes, did that, did that too, he beat the boss, and then went to another world to repeat. Got bored about that? Well, this entire work is written like that. Not worth the time.
it's good .........................................................................................................................................
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.......................................................... I love it pity its update time is long ...........................................................
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writing quality is good story development is average the main charachter is a idiot updates are good its a multiverse Criticism- A nerf is something extremely negative and should not be used in a novel ppl on tgis app do not possess more than 10 braincell so they will immediately give you 1 star for nerf rather than trying to nerf him try not giving him the power at all also make him not want to fight like a idiot the author also puts him training i nsecrecy for many years...then why doesnt he do taht from the beggining it is also stupid to make the mc go to the place where his powers originated from
Nah Yami was fckbastart the story gonna make many haters haha......mm................... ....................................... ...
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this is a very good novel, author why did you drop this?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Author pls I gotta know if you are dropping this it's been so long and yet no updates pls tell me if it's been discontinued or not I've read the comments on 1 of the chapters you said the story is continuing soon but I need to know pls when is it???
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Good Wish fulfillment fanfic. hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
It's been a while and yet still no chapters. is the Author ok or not cause after this long I'm starting to feel concerned. I should probably go to that place where they have the books they've written.
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It's too fast paced and you dont mc connect or even talk to anyone. The only real thing you know about mc is that he's overpowered and likes to fight
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the mc is useless, he wants to prove that normal humans are powerful but still asks for hax wishes like jin moris abilities and saitamas strength. This is pointless because these are not normal humans and jin mori is not a human at all.
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This novel has no plot, it's just mc fighting a bunch of strong characters from many different animes and it ends up getting very tiring. It's not a bad fanfic, but it's also not a good one. I recommend it only to someone who wants to read fights without caring about any plot.
I'm here for fighting and that's what I got. hfjfhdhdhdhdhhdhdheodhfkidjdgdjjdjdue been diwodjeiudjdur brm die urn eiudkduekeidjdksis hen ksus
this is so over the top and cringey that it's hard to bear. the development , MCs thought process and actions are illogical , unnecessary and idiotic .
apenas luta sem mais nada tudo e extremamente rápido num capitulo ele ta lutando e no outro já ta lutando com outra pessoa algumas coisas não fazem sentido pra mim basicamente e só luta e mais luta
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Author here......................................................................................................................................................................................take your time reading this one and don't rush to drop is all i ask,,
The author nerfed the main character immediately. What was the point of giving him the strength of saitama if you were just going to nerf him? You might as well made him wish for something else
MC have female face and body. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Absolute waste of time. So, content, there is none. You get exactly what the synopsis say. There is no interaction at all from the MC with anyone, frankly this looks like more like an eternal description without anything of note. MC did this and then that, he did all those even with how ridiculous it sounds, then a time skip of 11 years because yes, did that, did that too, he beat the boss, and then went to another world to repeat. Got bored about that? Well, this entire work is written like that. Not worth the time.
it's good .........................................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler .......................................................... I love it pity its update time is long ...........................................................
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writing quality is good story development is average the main charachter is a idiot updates are good its a multiverse Criticism- A nerf is something extremely negative and should not be used in a novel ppl on tgis app do not possess more than 10 braincell so they will immediately give you 1 star for nerf rather than trying to nerf him try not giving him the power at all also make him not want to fight like a idiot the author also puts him training i nsecrecy for many years...then why doesnt he do taht from the beggining it is also stupid to make the mc go to the place where his powers originated from
Nah Yami was fckbastart the story gonna make many haters haha......mm................... ....................................... ...
Reveal Spoiler this is a very good novel, author why did you drop this?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Author pls I gotta know if you are dropping this it's been so long and yet no updates pls tell me if it's been discontinued or not I've read the comments on 1 of the chapters you said the story is continuing soon but I need to know pls when is it???
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Good Wish fulfillment fanfic. hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
It's been a while and yet still no chapters. is the Author ok or not cause after this long I'm starting to feel concerned. I should probably go to that place where they have the books they've written.
Reveal Spoiler It's too fast paced and you dont mc connect or even talk to anyone. The only real thing you know about mc is that he's overpowered and likes to fight
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Reveal Spoiler the mc is useless, he wants to prove that normal humans are powerful but still asks for hax wishes like jin moris abilities and saitamas strength. This is pointless because these are not normal humans and jin mori is not a human at all.
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Reveal Spoiler This novel has no plot, it's just mc fighting a bunch of strong characters from many different animes and it ends up getting very tiring. It's not a bad fanfic, but it's also not a good one. I recommend it only to someone who wants to read fights without caring about any plot.
I'm here for fighting and that's what I got. hfjfhdhdhdhdhhdhdheodhfkidjdgdjjdjdue been diwodjeiudjdur brm die urn eiudkduekeidjdksis hen ksus
this is so over the top and cringey that it's hard to bear. the development , MCs thought process and actions are illogical , unnecessary and idiotic .
apenas luta sem mais nada tudo e extremamente rápido num capitulo ele ta lutando e no outro já ta lutando com outra pessoa algumas coisas não fazem sentido pra mim basicamente e só luta e mais luta
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Author here......................................................................................................................................................................................take your time reading this one and don't rush to drop is all i ask,,