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What would happen when a normal guy gets reincarnated as son Gohan in the one piece world.
any kind of criticism is welcomed. so please tell me about any shortcomings so that I can improve my work.
Disclaimer: this is my first time writing a novel.
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shameless author is here! I just want to say that keep the criticism coming.