Twilight: Metal and Speed

LV 14

DetachedDreamer

The grammar isn't bad i guess. but this story has problems. The MC being the main one. Boring, a loser, talks weird, acts like a dueschebag, and hates people. He says people are the worst but its obvious that he sees himself reflected in everyone else because he's the worst. The first chapter sums this all up for you. He says he has quicksilvers powers but he doesn't understand how fast he is at all. comparing him to DC speedsters lol. its obvious the author does this because of his inability to write real emotional relationships or friendships at all so he resorts to a garbage MC that can avoid all that. Never understood the appeal of MCs like this, so this could all be an opinion shared only by me. The author says if you don't like the story then stop reading because he's writing it his way. Sounds good!👍

LV 15

Fyrus

My review is a result of my own opinion, I'd suggest reading for yourself.

LV 4

Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 3

Unimwoshi_Ogbeche_7256

I’ll take the book Contact me if you’re still into that idea

LV 3

Anarhia

Hey, Author-san) The beginning is promising, so keep writing more, it's very interesting what will happen next! It is also interesting how wide are the possibilities of mc to transform metal? Can he become a girl in a metal form and remain her after the transformation is canceled?!