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The story is about a Chris who gets put in Twilight but he doesn't have much knowledge of the world, because he didn't see the movies... how will he survive in the world of Twilight.
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My opinion the MC is a good guy,not cautios and smart and maybe have a mental problem he expecting Edward to read his mind(100% true) but he not doing anything to defense againts it like not going to fork he do not have obligation to go there🤔 because that place is dangerous and 99% the danger is because Bella and the reason she still a live because she is the main character and he is a normal human he do not know if he have power before he go to fork but he still choose to go to fork not really a smart move. Its just my opinion good luck on tour work author 🙏👍👍
Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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Estaría genial si estuviera bien hecho, el contexto no es detallado, la calidad de escritura le falta, no hay estabilidad de actualización y el diseño de personajes está horrible.
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I like the story, wish updates were more frequent but the author is doing their thing so can't really complain. This story is very similar to another twilight fanfic, (almost the exact same) obviously there are differences. A good read so far and am eager to see how the story progresses
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I think this is a decent fanfic. But it def could have been better. The good points are the story and the MC they are cool and i like their character. The main problem is the finer points. The two big ones are the romance between the MC and his girl seeming to be very weak and thin feeling like there was no real relationship there just a cordiality that included kissing. The other week point is the character dialog not being enough to make you care about the characters. The MC seem mostly fleshed out but the other characters didn't seem to have as solid a foundation or they were not given enough time or dialog for us to understand their character. Another good point thought was the action that really was awesome and kept you entertain all in all it was a decent read.
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Pretty nice the story is very similar to the TWILIGHT new wolf but this is a little better it has a lot common with it particularly the 5th chapter otherwise it is a nice story
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I hope u update more than one chapter. .....................................................................................................
Aside from the awkward start, it's a good read overall .................................................... ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
hope you don't drop this it's good stuff so far......................... . . ....... ... ..................... ...............
Very very good man keep up the good work and don't drop.....................................................................................
He dropped it...........................No update in 10 days he won't update anymore............................................M***********.
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