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Sakura Yuki was on his way home when he sees a child almost getting run over by a truck, rushing to save the child he ended up sacrificing himself. Thinking he was dead he is instead transported into the abyss of reincarnation and met God, due to him saving the child he gets 5 wishes, there he wished to travel to an anime world called Danmachi with a system to help him get stronger.
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This is my first story so some suggestions will be helpful thanks!
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NOTICE: I do not own the characters of Danmachi and everything written is a work of fiction that deviate from this world.
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So far everything is going in a good direction. Even if the author has updated once a week I am okay with it. Considering most works I read so far update once to twice a month only. Thanks for the hard work ๐
Overall its great, the story,system,characters are amazing. The only thing that this novel's imperfection is the chapters is too short. I know you are new to this and I hope that you can fix this imperfection. Your novel has a lot of potential, never give up on it. Also don't rush writing the novel, write at your own pace because some writer rush the plot as a result they made it confusing, they made the MC OP making the novel boring to. This novel will be great if you add a twist or add something special.
I want to see how this novel will develop its a fresh change of wind for me making it super exciting. Thanks for giving me such a nice fanfiction to read author ๐
The story slowly gets some wind. Itโs introduction to some abilities are normal but still they get you intrested. What the author plans for his character. I am looking forward to it. Thanks for the hard work author ๐
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I am honestly really enjoying this, I like the character and the progression of the story, unfortunately the release rate prevents me from giving you a higher score and in truth is ruining it for me, if you had a semi constant release rate such as weekly or even bi-weekly. Other then the release rate good story, look forward to more in the future.
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Reveal Spoiler Donโt get confused but the other restarted the story so my former Reviews arenโt worth much anymore... no they still hold strong the author started with a completely new and fun story not that new but it goes in a interesting direction. Also have fun reading boys and girls maybe even someone that identifies as helicopter or hermaphrodite will find it enjoyable.
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