/ Fantasy / Under The Crimson Moonlight
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In a world that suffers under the oppressive foot of an authoritarian theocratic government, a rebellion rages on. Myleth is a boy who has had many things taken away from him in life. After obtaining powerful magic abilities, Myleth’s ready to exact revenge on the man responsible. Myleth must go on a quest to steal all of the royal houses’ sigils so that he can take on God himself.
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It's the prologue and things are quite intense already. I don't really get what's things supposed to be or what action is partaking on some scene, like my brain got lost when people speedrun about their life's accomplishes. If the world's that red colored, i wonder what it'd look like if someone decided to pick their pen? Characters background's a little too much ambiguous, but there's room for having some spill out a little far down the line so if written comprehensively, it might make them more believable.
Very good start. A lot of aspects get revealed in the first chapter itself, which will help in the build-up of the coming chapters. I love the fast paced action sequences. Though i don't have a problem with the detailed descriptions, i do feel the paragraphs do tend to become too long in places. But overall a pretty gripping beginning. Very good work. Need more chapters.
Interesting, author might consider a few edits here and there and am just writing to say that am waiting for the next chapter, where is it????????!!!!!!!!