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Jin SettingSun was a depressed youth, he was suddenly reincarnated into another universe with Qi cultivation and demon beast. Armed only with the level up system he face this new world head on
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The story here is quite good, in fact it is very interesting. Here it kinda reminds me of Invincible Level Up or something novel. I just hope that it doesn't become like this novel where the MC go to revenge everywhere, support humiliation and then beat the **** out of them. The start somehow ressemble to ILU but I pray that the author would fix this habit to exaggerate things and RAGE !!! things. If it could, it would be a very good story just like mine (I know. I'm just bragging)
Nice please release more chapter... its a nice story... ................................ thanks for the chapter...........................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................
Love it please release moreeee moarrrrr!!!! I NEEDDDD ARHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Might look like little at the start. But at the end I started ranting more about what I've read. There are spoilers so this is of course blocked off to those that don't want spoilers. Note : Will not continue reading this. Writing Quality - You can find some Grammar mistakes on there. Stability of updates - So far there is no schedule Story development - It's fast paced which is really nice. It's somewhat interesting. Character design - You don't even know how the characters look like. I don't even know if the MC is robust or tiny or what his skin colour is. Which most good novels include so you Have an image of their characters. But you know that the MC is really depressed. World Background - No world background other than The empire and Qin Clan. Not a video game universe. Like it says. Start reminds me of other reincarnation novels. There is no need for 7 cultivation techniques for example QI, Body and heart. It's just an overkill. Some of the discussions are really awkward. Plus Jin acts like hes known Mervin forever. He just met him a day ago. Never talked to him before. The past body host might have some feelings but not enough for the MC to cry over him and act like this. We don't even know how the MC got the body. Even if the last vessel of the body knew him for 2 years. He did not know him. No need to explain to much into this. Also Orain was a ****** weak servant too like Mervin. But he becomes a Deacon and get a level 5 mortal body really quick. The just saves a random girl he finds - "GET THE HELL AWAY FROM HER", shouted Jin as he charged at the rhino. No need to explain that one. No need to add more to this. P.S - Good luck. - Sincerely Beyond Namez
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this is an interesting story that get the main character to be OP by ant genocide. So far it is fast-paced and I can see the future for the story. keep up the good work! For Author To be honest I think the author being a little to Humble, his writing is perfectly fine and I enjoyed reading the fight scene and hasn't had any problems with the story so far
Please Update please Author ;w; I really need this so much. It's been 2 months since the last update. AUTHOOORRRR.... Please mOreeeeeee............ I really need more more more more
Please Update please Author ;w; I really need this so much. It's been 2 months since the last update. AUTHOOORRRR.... Please mOreeeeeee............ I really need more more more more
Interesting at the start. Would hope to see more development but the story update is really slow and eventually come to a stop. Do not pick up this story. The update is non existent
every thing is good but you are giving updates very slow...................................................................................................................................................................................
this is an interesting story that get the main character to be OP. So far it is fast-paced and I can see the future for the story. keep up the good work!
Starts out okay kept me interested enough to read the 13 chapters but then no more. No updates for the pass 2-3 months disappointing. Seems like this story had some potential. Too bad the author never came back.
it’s another one of those novels where the author makes the mc’s stupidity level high to the point of over exaggeration, and one of those if it was real life the mc would’ve died 1000x over, it would be great to read as it is a system novel but the author himself ruins it in an attempt to be hilarious when usually not a lot of people think stupidity in action is funny 🤷🏼♂️🤷🏼♂️
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Awesome story. Totally different system. Recommend everyone to try it out. The extra words are to fill up the rest of the 140 characters, hope this seems enough.
I want to rate this 5star, but the updates of chapter is unknown... I like the story, so make clear for the chapter updates when is the time of release...
Really good read uptill now, the story definitely has potential. I have read quite a lot of this genre and to be frank the story has been fun so far.Keep supporting the author and hope for increased updates...✌
I am thoroughly enjoying this story and hope it continues to develop. My only critic is that it needs some editing love as far as I can see. Hopefully it continues and an editor steps up to assist! But to the creator great job!
I see good reviews I’m now interested. “Cursed 140 characters, cursed 140 characters, cursed 140 character. Cursed 140 characters, cursed 140 characters.” I like systems it’s always fill of new ideas and techniques.
Not bad...... But very few updates..... Scenes s rank quest may be seen in ultimate or something story....... well over it is nice story line.
release some chapter please............... can't wait anymore.................................................................................................
PLZ HELP GET THIS TO THE TOP, THE CONCEPT IS AMAZING! WE CAN DO THIS PEOPLE! Get this to the top! We need this to be one of the greats! I THINK WE CAN DO IT!