Unraveled Destinies

The pacing felt a bit uneven at times. Some parts of the story moved at a breakneck speed, while others seemed to drag on. With a bit of fine-tuning in terms of pacing and character development, this story has the potential to be truly outstanding.

Very good chapter if u continue this with the same quality this would be a really great chapter and also please show more of the the main charecters past so that we could also relate to him better. Will be waiting for the next chapter!!!!