Vale, The (Hot) Windtalker (A Mobile Legends Story)

Wow what an amazing twist! Looking forward for next chapters. But can Vale really defeat HC? i cant even imagine. Hc is good mage counter in the actual MLBB. hahaha

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EuricaBC

So far so good. I hope this will last up to the end. Im a bit interested of what will happen next. It's good to know that you are writing in a first person perspective.

kakaiba ito, so far sakto yung grammar. ill give you a 5 for the application of hero skills. sana masama din ho yung fave kong si Akai. at looking forward po sa love story kung meron ho. muka namang nakakaexcite sana di mawala yung suspense til ending ho

-love the drama.. and the set-up. -expecting more twists to come.. -good job though for the first person role -can feel the momentum of harith -skills are properly used

Most relevant story to ML. tapos konektado pa sa skills nila ang mga pangyayari. sana ito manalo. Yung iba arte arte lang eh saka pambata masyado

Fantastically done! Good job! Sana masali sa top 3! xldjflsjdlsjdlksjlkdfjslkdfjslkfjdslkfjsdlfjslkfjdskl hfjslkfjlsdkjflskjdisjfaosjaofjdslafjlajflkjsdlkjdfsiesojfislfmz,.nlkaljfeijosjalfdsjiejilsejilssejislfjlsiefjsi

Twist is so commendable! Waiting for next chapters! Sorry for the 140 characters! (xdlsfjslfjlsdkfjslkfjsklddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd)

Amaziingg! 140 chars (sdslfdkjslja;lfjs;lkfjksfjsddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd)

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Story's alarming and unusual! Twists are not expected the way they were! And oh! I love the titles of each chapter.. Keep it up! sdfdsfdsfsd fks reijfksldflsjsoefijsl sljflks;ajf idsapf ap

Truly a must read! Your title got my attrntion! Id give you my power stone next time! Hydfyzcjldajjvnjasfjsskbvfgxjgzhhvbjhjgfjfafjovhfzbbcnknfdhc

Pakibilis po update!!!! xcitd na ako!! (140 chars)sdfs dslskfls sdnfjsnjfsnkfns sfnslfsd

Cool. Nicely done. pa update po araw araw lodi, nasa library ko na po lodi. ganda storya po:) Cool. Nicely done. pa update po araw araw lodi, nasa library ko na po lodi. ganda storya po:)